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Correction de fautes en anglais?!

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In his first testimony, Jankle has spoken about the composition of the different brands of cigarettes his company product. Afterward, he has explained that the customers had the choice to choose a cigarette with less nicotine. In his second testimony, he has said to the defense that the cigarettes caused sickness if they are abused. He has also told that to smoke more than two packs a day was dangerous. During his declaration, the defense lawyer has asked to Jankle why he did not warn the public that smoking more than two packs of cigarettes a day was dangerous. Jankle did not answer at this question. His testimony has damaged the defense because he did not say the same things in his two declarations.


En fait, j'aimerais savoir si vous voyez des fautes de grammaire dans mon texte en anglais. Sinon dites-moi si vous comprenez au moins le texte!

Merci d'avance =)

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In his first testimony, Jankle has spoken about the composition of the different brands of cigarettes his company products. Afterwards, he has explained that the customers had the choice to choose a cigarette with less nicotine. In his second testimony, he has said to the defense that the cigarettes caused sickness if they are abused. He has also told that to smoking more than two packs a day was dangerous. During his declaration, the defense lawyer has asked to Jankle why he did not warn the public that smoking more than two packs of cigarettes a day was dangerous. Jankle did not answer to this question. His testimony has damaged the defense because he did not say the same things in his two declarations.

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