Ecrire une lettre à un ami en anglais
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Bonsoir, j'ai un dm à faire qui est:
Imaginer que vous allez rendre visite à un ami à New York city.
Expliquer lui pourquoi vous voudriez venir.
Utiliser un vocabulaire riche et parler des monuments, environnement,...
Dear Jason,
I would like to thank you for welcoming me.
This year I will be sixteen. Now I am in high school. I have learnt English starting from 2006. With my free time, I like surfing on the internet, talking with my friends, reading books, going shopping, playing badminton or watching some films/movies(pareil).
I would like to spend my vacation with your family and you because I'd like to improve my English and I'd like to discover the American culture. I've decided to visit you because I think it is the best way to practise my English.
New York must be a fantastic city because there are many museums, streets and skyscrapers. I want to see the Statue of Liberty. I also like New York city because it's so big. I would like to see Ground Zero, Central park and Broadway. I would like to go and see a play at the theatre. I would like to cook brownies as well as all of the American dishes. That would by why I'd come precisely in Christmas.
Christmas in New York is magical: people who sing in front of houses and holding candles in their hands. It's tremendous, fantastic to hear and to see. The snow which falls even if there is here. I am even going to bring my camera.
J'ai commencé mais je dois un peu plus développer et utiliser du vocabulaire riche et j'en trouve pas. Aidez moi et si possible corrigez moi car je pense avoir fait des fautes. Merci d'avance!!!
Il faut que j'ajoute des choses mais je ne vois pas quoi dire d'autre car ma lettre doit faire 150 mots maximum.
Imaginer que vous allez rendre visite à un ami à New York city.
Expliquer lui pourquoi vous voudriez venir.
Utiliser un vocabulaire riche et parler des monuments, environnement,...
Dear Jason,
I would like to thank you for welcoming me.
This year I will be sixteen. Now I am in high school. I have learnt English starting from 2006. With my free time, I like surfing on the internet, talking with my friends, reading books, going shopping, playing badminton or watching some films/movies(pareil).
I would like to spend my vacation with your family and you because I'd like to improve my English and I'd like to discover the American culture. I've decided to visit you because I think it is the best way to practise my English.
New York must be a fantastic city because there are many museums, streets and skyscrapers. I want to see the Statue of Liberty. I also like New York city because it's so big. I would like to see Ground Zero, Central park and Broadway. I would like to go and see a play at the theatre. I would like to cook brownies as well as all of the American dishes. That would by why I'd come precisely in Christmas.
Christmas in New York is magical: people who sing in front of houses and holding candles in their hands. It's tremendous, fantastic to hear and to see. The snow which falls even if there is here. I am even going to bring my camera.
J'ai commencé mais je dois un peu plus développer et utiliser du vocabulaire riche et j'en trouve pas. Aidez moi et si possible corrigez moi car je pense avoir fait des fautes. Merci d'avance!!!
Il faut que j'ajoute des choses mais je ne vois pas quoi dire d'autre car ma lettre doit faire 150 mots maximum.
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Bonsoir, j'ai un dm à faire qui est:Imaginer que vous allez rendre visite à un ami à New York city.
Expliquer lui pourquoi vous voudriez venir.
Utiliser un vocabulaire riche et parler des monuments, environnement,...
Dear Jason,
I would like to thanks you for welcoming me.
This year I will be sixteen years old Now and I am currently studying in high school. I have learnt English starting from 2006 started to learn English four years ago.
I have many hobbies and a few that stand out. With my free time During my spare time, I like surfing on the internet, talking chating with my friends, reading books novels, going shopping, playing badminton or watching movies.
I would like to spend my vacation holidays with your family and you you and your family because I'd like to improve my English and I'd like to discover the American culture. I've decided to visit you because I think it is the best way to practise my English. for a long time, my dream has been to speak fluently English. I like the English language because it is a universal language and American culture fascinates me since the United-States is one of the most important country in the world.
New York must be I believe that New York is a fantastic city because there are many museums, high streets and skyscrapers. I want to see the Statue of Liberty. I also like New York city because it's so big this city is so large. I would like to see Ground Zero, Central park and Broadway and of course the legendary Statue of Liberty. I would like to go and see a play at the theatre. I would like wish to cook brownies as well as all of the American dishes. That would by why I'd come precisely in Christmas. <---- Cela n'eplique pas ta raison de vouloir aller pendant les fetes de noel
Christmas in New York is magical simply because the ambiance is here!: people who sing in front of houses and holding candles in their hands, the decorations in streets are awsome... It's tremendous, fantastic to hear and to see. The snow which falls even if there is here. <---- cette phrase n'a aucun sens I am even going to bring my camera. I will definitely bring my photo camera to take pictures as a souvenir.
J'ai commencé mais je dois un peu plus développer et utiliser du vocabulaire riche et j'en trouve pas. Aidez moi et si possible corrigez moi car je pense avoir fait des fautes. Merci d'avance!!!
Il faut que j'ajoute des choses mais je ne vois pas quoi dire d'autre car ma lettre doit faire 150 mots maximum.
Aie y'a des fautes!!! Merci de m'avoir corrigé
Je voudrais savoir comment on dit:
-C'est fantastique à entendre et surtout à voir.
-La neige qui tombe sur les toits des grattes-ciel. ( cette phrase je vais la mettre juste après " ...in steets are awsome...
Et ensuite je dirai: -That would by why I'd come precisely in Christmas.
Je pense que c'est bon il y a plus de 150 mots, NON? Je souhaiterais que vous me donniez votre avis sur cette lettre.
Je voudrais savoir comment on dit:
-C'est fantastique à entendre et surtout à voir.
-La neige qui tombe sur les toits des grattes-ciel. ( cette phrase je vais la mettre juste après " ...in steets are awsome...
Et ensuite je dirai: -That would by why I'd come precisely in Christmas.
Je pense que c'est bon il y a plus de 150 mots, NON? Je souhaiterais que vous me donniez votre avis sur cette lettre.
iv995 a dit :
donc tous est faux alorsRien n'est faux c'est juste que tu es dans un forum Francais, tout le monde ne parle pas Anglais
C'est fantastique à entendre et surtout à voir : la phrase est un peu complexe tu peux pas faire plus simple? Its Amazing to hear and especially to watch... sa l'fait pas trop moi jdis
La neige qui tombe sur les toits des grattes-ciel : Snow falling off buildings roof.
iv995 a dit :
Aie y'a des fautes!!! Merci de m'avoir corrigéJe voudrais savoir comment on dit:
-C'est fantastique à entendre et surtout à voir.
-La neige qui tombe sur les toits des grattes-ciel. ( cette phrase je vais la mettre juste après " ...in steets are awsome...
Et ensuite je dirai: -That would by why I'd come precisely in Christmas.
Je pense que c'est bon il y a plus de 150 mots, NON? Je souhaiterais que vous me donniez votre avis sur cette lettre.
Ye un truc genial sa sapelle reverso lol et encore mieu googel !!
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