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Bonjour, pouvez vous me dire si les phrases traduites sont bien traduit? merci enormement Diana Spencer was born July 1th (first), 1961 (one thousand nine hundred sixty-one) in Sandringham, Norfolk, UK. Ses parents étaient Edward Spencer et Frances Ruth Burke Roche. Elle avait deux sœurs et Sarah Jane et son frère Charles. She was the illegitimate progeny of Charles II of England and a descendante of Henry IV King of France. Following the death of his paternal grandfather, his father became the 8(eight)th Earl Spencer and she acquired the title of Lady Diana Spencer. His parents divorced in December 1968 (one thousand nine hundred and sixty eight), her father remarried, his mother also, Diana lived with and her father. It was a nice girl, friendly, always happy and wise. She had a passion for animals, she had dogs, rabbits, and birds. She made of studies mediocre to Riddlesworth Hall in Norfolk and Western school of Bruyeres in Kent. At 16(sixteen), she studied at the Institut Alpin Videmanette (an institution for young girls of good family in Rougemont, Switzerland). She had talents as a pianist, she excelled in sport and she wanted to be dancer. She met her future husband, Prince Charles in November 1977(one thousand nine hundred and seventy seven) but he was in love of Sarah Spencer, Diana's eldest sister. She became engaged to Prince Charles February 6th(sixth), 1981 (one thousand nine hundred eighty one), but Buckingham Palace announced the engagement officially February 24th(twenty fourth), 1981 (one thousand nine hundred eighty one). Following the engagement, she met during her first official appearance, March 9th(ninth), 1981(one thousand nine hundred eighty one), Princess Grace Kelly who was the princess of Monaco. Diana married Prince Charles July 29th(twenty ninth), 1981(one thousand nine hundred eighty one) at St. Paul's Cathedral in Great Britain. Dice her marriage she becomes Princess of Wales, Duchess of Cornwall, Duchess of Rothesay. She was popular and loved by the British. January 21st (twenty first), 1982(one thousand nine hundred eighty-two),she gave birth to her first son and first heir Prince William . Then September 15th(fifteenth), 1984(one thousand nine hundred eighty four), she gave birth to her second son Harry. Diana and Prince Charles be are separated December 9th(ninth), 1992(one thousand nine hundred ninety-two) and the divorce was pronounced August 28th(twenty eighth), 1996(one thousand nine hundred ninety-six). She participated in many charities such as aid to victims of AIDS or the fight against the use of antipersonnel mines but she helped poor children in particular African and she met several personalities like Nelson Mandela, the Dalai Lama and Mother Teresa. In April 1987(one thousand nine hundred eighty seven) she was the first celebrity to be photographed touching a person with AIDS. 30th(thirtieth) August 1997(one thousand nine hundred ninety seven), she decided to go