Correction anglais

Dernière réponse : 21 Décembre 2010 18:41 dans Etudes - Travail

justine59670

21 Décembre 2010 17:49:32

bonjour ,alors voila ,en anglais il me faut ecrire une lettre pour ma correspondante
sauf que mon anglais n'est pas tellement au point :whistle:

voici ma lettre :

hello jackie !

How are you?
I really hope ,that you holiday were super ! Here since 1 week it snows ,how's the weather in clifton park?

As I told you ,I love sports ,I play badminton ,swimming and cheerleader for 2 years ,I also do gymnastics in my school ,i go jogging during my weekend but except winter! And you ,what is your sport?

Do you travel a lot during your holidays?
I travel often but mostly in France,on april I will go in Egypt
When is your birthday? What profession would you have? And What kind of music do you listen?

We have the same tastes, but I do not eat too much but I like especially prepare the cakes!

I wish you a Merry Christmas and a happy new year late!
Soon

Tank you for the letter

merci d'avance

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LaPeruvienne

21 Décembre 2010 18:17:15

Hello Jackie !

How are you?
I really hope that you enjoyed your holidays ! Here since 1 week it snows, how's the weather in Clifton Park ?

As I told you, I love sports, I play badminton, I do swimming and cheerleader for 2 years, I also do gymnastics in my school, I go jogging during my weekends but except in winter ! And you, what is your sports ?

Do you travel a lot during your holidays ?
I often travel but mostly in France, on April I will go in Egypt.
When is your birthday ? What job would you want to have ? And what kind of music do you listen ?

We have the same hobbies, however I don't eat too much but I especially like to prepare cakes !

I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year late !

Thank you for the letter.

Bye.

Je me suis permise de corriger quelques petites expressions pour que ce soit plus fluide mais l'ensemble n'était pas si terrible que ça comme on pourrait le croire en te lisant. J'espère que ça te convient.