DM anglais

Bonsoir à tous alors voilà j'ai un Dm d'anglais à rendre Mardi et je voulais savoir si vous pouviez me corriger mes fautes se serais super merci bien bonsoir à tous
Au revoir.

Dear Sarah,
It was good to hear from you and I'm glad you succeeded at your exam. Sorry for answering so late, but like you asked I went on a trip so I wasn't at home and couldn't answer. Let me explain to you. Like you know I told you my mother and me wanted to go to Italy but my father didn't like travelling but my mother said "Darling you must gather ye( ca c'est du langage medieval, c'est utilise pour des discours soutenus ou des citations mais pas tous les jours non plus   ) rosebuds while ye may" So we went to Italy for two weeks. We took the car and drove. over thereit took us two days.


Actually were in Tuscany is a region in Central Italy here we were in an hotel with an amazing view over the lake Garda which is the largest lake in Italy. Let alone all the activities they propose indeed there were a swimming pool , a sauna, billiards, a bowling, a tennis court, a room of fitness , a Jacuzzi. And a large dining room and the waiter were nice and funny. The dishes were appetizing and delicious. And we went to see the arena of Verona the city of Romeo and Juliette. We saw the costume and the decorate of the spectacle it was really remarkable. I think it's was the best memory about this holydays. Also I saw the famous The leaning Tower of Pisa because it leaned. And my father took a photo with my sister who made seeming to push the tower it was pretty succeeded. I will show you. The landscapes fill me with wonder it was really outstanding. Now I hope go to Ireland because I like the music and the landscape there are over there. Say hello to your family for me.

I'm looking forward to seeing you soon
xx
Laurane