Correction d'une lettre rédigée en anglais.

oula, tu as utilisé un traducteur auto ?

Hello Julia !

Thank you for answering my letter.
I am happy to know your family a little better and i'm very impatient to meet everybody !

I hope that I will arrive to be understood when I speak and it’s not won =)

I hope to be understood when i'll speak.



I am sorry but for the moment, my travel is rather confused.


I only that I KNOW is that my train will arrive at London St Pancras by the Eurostar at 13:28 et la date !!!!



Then, I suppose I must go to OISE’s center.


I hope that a member of OISE will explain me how to go to your home and go back to the center every morning.

Anyway, OISE must be used to giving such informations.

Otherwise, I am going to feel a little confused !

I am very relieved to know that you are “mainly vegetarian” ! Indeed, I don’t eat too much meal…


[...]


etc. fais des phrases plus courtes, plus simples. C'est plus facile a traduire et ca fait moins "franglais"

j'aime le " [...] etc ".

Pas de traducteur automatique nan ^^ Mais j'utilise un dictionnaire et je fais beaucoup de mot à mot alors ... Je sais que je pense en franças et qu'après, je traduis alors que 'un anglais ne dirait pas ça comme ça"... C'est d'ailleurs pour ça que je pard en angleterre ! J'ai corrigé ce que tu m'as corrigé et essayer de simplifier un peu la fin... Le problème c'est qu ca m parait deja tellement simple en français et tellement compliqué dès que j veux passer en anglais XD. En tous cas merci beaucoup pour cette aide !

Hello Julia !

Thank you for answering my letter. I am happy to know your family a little better and impatient to meet everybody ! I hope to be understood when I will speak in England.

I am sorry but for the moment, my travel is rather confused. I only that I know that my train will arrive at London St Pancras by the Eurostar at 13:28. Then, I must go to OISE’s center. I hope that a member of OISE will explain to me how to go to your home and to go to the center every morning. . Anyway, OISE must be used to giving much information. Otherwise, I am going to feel a little confused !

I am very relieved to know that you are “mainly vegetarian” ! Indeed, I don’t eat too much meal… I like vegetables and fish too. I was a little hampered to seem not polished if I don’t eat up because I don’t eat meal. Moreover, I enjoy cooking too when I am with my family the weekend. During the week, I have hardly time and furthermore, it is much less easy to cook for a single person.

Have you the habit to welcome students like me ? In this case, know you if I have to take anything particular ? Or is there anything that people often forget and of whom I should think ?

Regards

Camille

mouais, j'aime toujours pas le "I hope that a member of OISE will explain to me how to go to your home and to go to the center every morning. . " (au passage, un seul point a la fin, pas deux)

et tu n'a pas mis la date de ton arrivée a la gare, ne l'oublie pas......

gnaaaa j'avais pas lu la fin....

"Have you the habit to welcome students like me"


utilise "used to", cette phrase craint un max

Autre tentative de correction de la fin de la lettre :

I am very relieved to know that you are “mainly vegetarian” ! Indeed, I don’t eat too much meat. I like vegetables and fish too, and I was a little hampered by the idea of leaving something in my plate because I know that it is not not polite. Moreover, I enjoy cooking too when I am with my family for the weekend because during the week, I hardly have time. Furthermore, it is much less easier to cook for a single person.

Do you often welcome students like me ?
In this case, do you know if I have to take anything particular ?
Or is there anything that people often forget and of whom I should think ?

Regards

Je dirais plutôt

A little more au lieu de little better
when I will speak english
I only know that my train ...
I hope that a member of OISE will explain how to go to your home and to reach the center.

I am very relieved to know that you are “mainly vegetarian” ! Indeed, I don’t eat much meat. I like vegetables and fish too, and I was a little hampered by the idea of leaving something in my plate because I know that it is not not polite. Moreover, I enjoy cooking when I am with my family the weekend, because during the week, I hardly have time. Furthermore, it is much less easier to cook for a single person.

Do you often welcome students like me ?
In this case, do you know if I have to bring anything particular ?
Or is there anything that people often forget and that I should think about ?