Correction d'une traduction

Dernière réponse : 15 Avril 2010 08:28 dans Etudes - Travail

line_C

14 Avril 2010 19:13:38

Bonjour, je suis en 3eme et voudrais aller en seconde Européenne, pour cela je dois écrire une lettre de motivation en Anglais. Je l'ai commencer mais ne suis pas certaine de ce que j'ai écrit, si vous pouviez me corriger et m'aider ça m'arrangerais bien .
Je vous remercie d'avance.

Mr, Mrs,

My name is Céline ... and I’m 15. I am a pupil of 3e in the Secondary school Henri Le Moal in Plozevet. I have been studying English since my 9 years old and I like a lot this language and his culture.
I would really like got into your European Classe for enrich my knowledge, my competences and for speak and understand more easily and quickly than now through the training of English.
Furthermore, History is a subject which I like a lot, to learn it in English is quite enthralling and enriching.
I would like live and work in england, so, this will also enable me to widen my circle of relationship through communicating with other Anglophone people and to discover various cultures.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favorable answer . Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

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14 Avril 2010 19:26:29

line_C a dit :

Bonjour, je suis en 3eme et voudrais aller en seconde Européenne, pour cela je dois écrire une lettre de motivation en Anglais. Je l'ai commencer mais ne suis pas certaine de ce que j'ai écrit, si vous pouviez me corriger et m'aider ça m'arrangerais bien .
Je vous remercie d'avance.

Mr, Mrs,

My name is Céline ... and I’m 15. I am a pupil of 3e in the Secondary school Henri Le Moal in Plozevet. I have been studying English since my I was 9 years old and I like a lot this language and his it's culture.
I would really like got to go into your European Classe for to enrich my knowledge, my competences and for to speak and understand more easily and quickly than now through the training of English.
Furthermore, History is a subject which I like a lot, to learn it in English is quite enthralling and enriching.
I would like to live and work in England, so this will also enable me to widen my circle of relationships through communication with other Anglophone english speaking people and to discover various cultures.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favorable answer . Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

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