Aide en anglais niveau 2nd URGENT
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Bonjour j'ai une redaction à faire en anglais et je voulais savoir si il y avait des fautes
Sujet : "mauvaises vacances"
ce travaille est a faire à deux je ne marquerais donc que mes répliques:
(vacances negatives)
This is nonsens,I have never seen a landscape so filthy.
When I went to the beach, there was several empty beer bottles on the floor whereas on the postcards , they said that it was the best , the most beautiful place .
What's more, the sea seemed polluted. I even saw a rat.
After seeing the worsy aspect of the sea , I wanted to go to see the center of the city, who was supposed to stay very traditional for example, its architecture and its food that makes the mouth water but when I'm arrived there, I was even more disappointed the food was disgusting , whithout any traditional house , it rained everyday and that wasn't on my planning
(replique de mon camarade )
(vacances positives)
Have you indeed?!! On the other ahn this hotel is the better that I've never knew.I will go back there because the staff was less worse than the population. They're polite, punctual, seviable then I can't complain about the service. I did like to go to my room because there was a bigger TV than at home. Ialso liked the bed who were very confortable and I did love the food and the cocktails of the bar in the hotel
So I think it was all the same a good experience
(Replique negative de mon camarade)
Merci d'avance de corriger mes fautes d'orthographe et de syntaxe
SANGOHAN13
SVP C EST VRAIMENT URGENT![:D]( ":D")
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Sujet : "mauvaises vacances"
ce travaille est a faire à deux je ne marquerais donc que mes répliques:
(vacances negatives)
This is nonsens,I have never seen a landscape so filthy.
When I went to the beach, there was several empty beer bottles on the floor whereas on the postcards , they said that it was the best , the most beautiful place .
What's more, the sea seemed polluted. I even saw a rat.
After seeing the worsy aspect of the sea , I wanted to go to see the center of the city, who was supposed to stay very traditional for example, its architecture and its food that makes the mouth water but when I'm arrived there, I was even more disappointed the food was disgusting , whithout any traditional house , it rained everyday and that wasn't on my planning
(replique de mon camarade )
(vacances positives)
Have you indeed?!! On the other ahn this hotel is the better that I've never knew.I will go back there because the staff was less worse than the population. They're polite, punctual, seviable then I can't complain about the service. I did like to go to my room because there was a bigger TV than at home. Ialso liked the bed who were very confortable and I did love the food and the cocktails of the bar in the hotel
So I think it was all the same a good experience
(Replique negative de mon camarade)
Merci d'avance de corriger mes fautes d'orthographe et de syntaxe
SANGOHAN13
SVP C EST VRAIMENT URGENT
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This is nonsense,I have never seen a landscape so filthy.
When I went to the beach, there was several empty beer bottles on the sand whereas on the postcards , they said that it was the best , the most beautiful place in the world.
What's more, the sea seemed polluted. I even saw a rat.
After seeing the worst aspect of the sea , I wanted to go to the city centre, which was supposed to be very traditional for example, its architecture and food that makes the mouth water but when I'm arrived there, I was even more disappointed. The food was disgusting , without any traditional houses , it rained everyday and that wasn't in my planning
(replique de mon camarade )
(vacances positives)
Have you indeed?!! On the other hand, this hotel is best that I've ever known. I will go back there because the staff were nicer than the people. They're polite, punctual, serviable; I can't complain about the service. I did like staying in my room because there was a bigger TV than at home. I also liked the bed which was very confortable and I did love the food and the cocktails in the hotel bar.
I think it was, all the same, a good experience
When I went to the beach, there was several empty beer bottles on the sand whereas on the postcards , they said that it was the best , the most beautiful place in the world.
What's more, the sea seemed polluted. I even saw a rat.
After seeing the worst aspect of the sea , I wanted to go to the city centre, which was supposed to be very traditional for example, its architecture and food that makes the mouth water but when I'm arrived there, I was even more disappointed. The food was disgusting , without any traditional houses , it rained everyday and that wasn't in my planning
(replique de mon camarade )
(vacances positives)
Have you indeed?!! On the other hand, this hotel is best that I've ever known. I will go back there because the staff were nicer than the people. They're polite, punctual, serviable; I can't complain about the service. I did like staying in my room because there was a bigger TV than at home. I also liked the bed which was very confortable and I did love the food and the cocktails in the hotel bar.
I think it was, all the same, a good experience
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