Aide en anglais niveau 2nd URGENT

Bonjour j'ai une redaction à faire en anglais et je voulais savoir si il y avait des fautes
Sujet : "mauvaises vacances"
ce travaille est a faire à deux je ne marquerais donc que mes répliques:

(vacances negatives)
This is nonsens,I have never seen a landscape so filthy.
When I went to the beach, there was several empty beer bottles on the floor whereas on the postcards , they said that it was the best , the most beautiful place .
What's more, the sea seemed polluted. I even saw a rat.
After seeing the worsy aspect of the sea , I wanted to go to see the center of the city, who was supposed to stay very traditional for example, its architecture and its food that makes the mouth water but when I'm arrived there, I was even more disappointed the food was disgusting , whithout any traditional house , it rained everyday and that wasn't on my planning

(replique de mon camarade )

(vacances positives)
Have you indeed?!! On the other ahn this hotel is the better that I've never knew.I will go back there because the staff was less worse than the population. They're polite, punctual, seviable then I can't complain about the service. I did like to go to my room because there was a bigger TV than at home. Ialso liked the bed who were very confortable and I did love the food and the cocktails of the bar in the hotel
So I think it was all the same a good experience

(Replique negative de mon camarade)

Merci d'avance de corriger mes fautes d'orthographe et de syntaxe
SANGOHAN13

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