Besoin d'aide pour ma lettre de motivation

Bonjour j'ai besoin d'aide pour corriger ma lettre de motivation en anglais !!! svp c'est tres important et assez urgent :

Object: Job application

Dear Sir or madam,
The real interests that I find in studying your projects lead me to apply to your agency. The sensitivity, the quality as well as the diversity of your works helped to confirm my choice. Working abroad in a worldwide acknowledged agency represents for me a very attractive opportunity to improve my skills. The cosmopolitan city such as Shanghai reinforces my goodwill to discover and deepen a culture, a way of life, and a new foreign and challenging work environment.
Having completed my studies in architecture at the Superior National Architectural School of Paris Val de Seine, I gained my experience within small and very active company as ECDM who obtained the “Albums of the young architecture”. International company with a solid reputation, like BCEOM, has also played an important part in my skills development. Within these two companies, I participated actively on different steps as Schematic design phase, design development phase and construction document phase on various and numerous projects as major urban projects, private projects, accommodation, offices and shops...
The mission with BCEOM in Libya (Tripoli) was based on Technical assistance for the large scale projects, Analyzing existing situations, proposing urban plans and on enhancing the urban standards by proposing technical documents content general concepts adapted to the Libyan environment, to support the urban regulations.

Coming from a multicultural environment, I have a great capacity of adaptation and I am able to bring fresh points of view that could be helpful to build a new approach to architectural design. I was able to put forward an exhibition in association with the Ministry of Culture in Tunisia about the conflicting problematic between modernity and tradition: a work consisting on the development of architecture in Tunisia between 1943-1955 Thanks to French architects development who contributed to rebuild the country The exhibition was success thanks to an intensive promotion through all media channels (radio,television and newspapers)
I developed during my final project “A multimodal platform” which responds to current issues about mobility in urban areas and which offer answers to the regulatory, urban sustainability and constructive constraints.
Independent and strong willed, I would like to assert my performances associated with my human values servicing your agency of which the eminent development will emphasize my ambitions, offering interesting possibilities of evolution.
Thinking that I have made a positive impression by my credentials, I wish to fulfil the profile you’re looking for and I would be delighted to attend for an interview and look forward to hearing from you soon.