Dissertation anglais

j'ai une dissert a rendre pour la fin de la semaine et on m'a conseillé de demander sur les forum donc serait-il possible de m'aider corriger mes fautes et voir si mes phrases sont bien compréhensibles?????



Today I'm somebody a little reserved which hates to remain alone, which always needs to be surrounded, to have a presence.
I like to be surrounded by my friends and my family and I don't like over all to be there for poeple whom I love being available as soon as one needs me.
I require that everyone is weel and if I can contribute has their hapiness I hessiste not a minute. I like to feel useful.

What I like over all is to make a success of what I undertake. For the moment much of things made a success of me such as my diploma, my driving license, my entry has the IUT as well as the success of my first year...

The IUT was really a success at my eyes because the IUT of Lyon is very famous and has a limited number of places.
And except for this school course, anything else really did interest me.
I didn't see anything making of other because this course opens various doors, gives full with concepts in various fields and helps me has to direct me in my future.


Today I don't know exactly in which field move, I hesitate between the event-driven one of the companies, human ressources and trade.
I'm not able to decide to me, to define exactly in which field I would feel best, in which I sees myself evolving, because I adore to organize things; parties, weenkend, etc.
I would like to do that on the level as of companies to organize their seminar, their meetings, etc.

But at the same time I like the relational with poeple, to help them has to find an employment, but I would like to be headhunter.

But in all the case of figure I wish to continue my studies by a professional license, and a professional master in order to have enough graduates to be able to hope for a comfortable life.