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Aide/correction lettre motivation Australie

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Bonjour à tous !
Je suis en école d'ingé et j'ai la chance de pouvoir faire une année de césure en entreprise l'année prochaine. Ayant envie de partir assez loin et ayant envie de parfaire mon anglais, j'ai trouvé tout naturel d'opter pour l'Australie !! :)
Donc si vous pouviez me donner qq conseils pour ma lettre de motiv' et/ou m'indiquer les erreurs d'anglais que j'aurais pû faire, n'hésitez pas !! Un immense merci d'avance !


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Dear Mrs/ Mr,

I am currently in my fourth year of a Master’s degree in electronics, telecoms and computing, and I now have the opportunity to do a one-year/6-month internship in industry as part of my degree programme. This paid internship could take place at dates convenient to you between July 2010 and August 2011.

I have just consulted the website of your company and I found it very attracting. XXX could offer me the opportunity to give an International dimension of my professional project. Beyond this job, this unique experience could help me to improve my English. Moreover, I always dreamed to discover Australia.

I would be glad to put into practice in XXX all my knowledge in electronics. My education has enabled me to gain knowledge and understanding of electronics, signals and computing. I appreciate that I have no full time experience in the engineering field. However, over the previous summers I worked in several firms where I gained an appreciation of what a job entails. Indeed, these jobs helped me to develop my communication, team work and technical skills. I also discovered the organization of a company and learned about safety norms.

Please find enclosed my CV. Thank you for considering my application and please do not hesitate to contact me if I can provide you with any further information. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

MON NOM

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