Bonjour ! Je dois répondre à une question en anglais mais j'ai besoin de votre aide pour corriger mes fautes. "Are there causes you would be ready to fight fort ? Illustrate your answer with examples." --> Sure, there are causes I would be ready to fight for. For example, if there is a man or a woman sitting in the street who is without house and ask someone to help his or her, I would be ready to give his or her some money or some eat. I think it's the littles (gestes) which make the bigs gifts and helps. Nowadays there is a lot of people who are without house and it's terrible for them when it's the winter or when there is no one to give them a support. In my opinion it's a cause very important. There is a second cause I would be ready to fight for : the illiteracy. Because to my mind all the people must have the (droit) to learn the writing and the reading. In particulary the girls who can't go to school in their country. In my book, to know read and write it's like a key. With this key you can access to the informations, to everything in your daily's life. Merci d'avance de m'avoir lu et de votre eventuelle aide ^^ .
Salut j'ai lu ton paragraphe et je pense que tu peux déjà corriger quelques éléments, peut-être que je vais oublier certaines choses mais bon après tout je ne suis pas prof d'anglais, pas encore du moins lol
Sure, there are causes I would be ready to fight for. For example, if there was a homeless man or woman sitting on the street who is without house and asking someone to help him or her, I would be ready to give him or her some money or some food. I think it's the less I can do(gestes) which make the bigs gifts and helps(pas très bien compris ce que tu voulais dire). Nowadays there are a lot of people who are without home and it's terrible for them when it's the winter or when there is no one to give them a support. In my opinion it's a cause very important cause. There is a second cause I would be ready to fight for : the illiteracy. Because to my mind all the peopleeveryone must have the right to learn the writing and the reading. In particulary Especially the girls who can't go to school in their country. In my book(???), to know how to read and write is like a key. With this key you can access to the informations, to everything in your daily's life.
Voila j'espère que ça a pu t'aider, mais je n'ai pas la prétention de te dire que ton texte est maintenant parfait, je ne suis qu'en première année de licence d'anglais.
