Corrigé d'un paragraphe d'anglais.

Salut j'ai lu ton paragraphe et je pense que tu peux déjà corriger quelques éléments, peut-être que je vais oublier certaines choses mais bon après tout je ne suis pas prof d'anglais, pas encore du moins lol

Sure, there are causes I would be ready to fight for. For example, if there was a homeless man or woman sitting on the street who is without house and asking someone to help him or her, I would be ready to give him or her some money or some food. I think it's the less I can do (gestes) which make the bigs gifts and helps(pas très bien compris ce que tu voulais dire). Nowadays there are a lot of people who are without home and it's terrible for them when it's the winter or when there is no one to give them a support. In my opinion it's a cause very important cause. There is a second cause I would be ready to fight for : the illiteracy. Because to my mind all the people everyone must have the right to learn the writing and the reading. In particulary Especially the girls who can't go to school in their country. In my book(???), to know how to read and write is like a key. With this key you can access to the informations, to everything in your daily's life.

Voila j'espère que ça a pu t'aider, mais je n'ai pas la prétention de te dire que ton texte est maintenant parfait, je ne suis qu'en première année de licence d'anglais.