Aide anglais

Bonjour j'ai un sujet en anglais a faire et je n'ai vraiment pas beaucoup d'idée !!!
pourriez vous m'aidez s'il vous plais

2. Do you believe that the people who feel most passionately about their careers are those who come across them by accident? Give examples to support your point of view.

Voila ce que j'ai fais :

Nowadays the career we choose affects our everyday life and our happiness, that's why it's important to make a good choice when we go in for a career.
First i'm going to see that people who make their choice by accident can be the more passionate by their job, and then i'm going to see that for some people, this is not the case.

If someone thought a lot about the choice of career, logically this person can have a job that he/she likes. And he/she can be happy in his/her life because he/she feels happy when he goes to job, when he/she works during the day…

When you want to have a job which fascinates you, you works a lot in your studies so that this is not by chance if you have a job you like.

merci d'avance