Correction de ma présentation en Anglais.

Bonjour à tous,
Voilà je vais bientôt passer un oral d'anglais et je dois me présenter. Est-ce que vous pouvez corriger ma présentation ??

My first name is ….. My surname is …..
I’m 16 years old. I was born in Vendôme on 19th December 1992.
I have got one sister and one brother. The name of my sister is Stéphanie, she have 22 years old. She is pregnant of 3 months.
The name of my brother is Alexis, he have 20 years old. He is in Faculty of letter to Tours.
I’m very shy and I’m quite talkative.
I live in ……….. with my father and my stepmother because my parents are divorced.
………… is a small village which is located south west of Vendôme. There are not enough thing to do.
I prefer a country life because there is less noise than in a town and I find that life is more pleasant.
I have no activity after school.
My favorite hobby is photography. I like taking landscape photo

I’m in BEP sales. I chose to do a BEP because I wanted to have my clothing store.
I study sales, geography, history, French, Spanish, mathematics, law and economy.
My favorite subjects are law, economy and history because I think that it’s very interesting.
I dislike Spanish.

I have already 5 training periods. My most significant training period took place last year. It lasted 3 weeks. I work in Vendôme in a shop whose name is MANOUKIAN. It’s a clothing store for women.

Merci : )