Correction d'un paragraphe d'anglais

Bonjours a tous,

Voila c'est un paragraphe que j'ai a faire , sur le thème : what is your favorite piece of music ? What feelings does it express ? Why do you like it ? How do you feel when you listen to it ?

le Paragraphe que j'ai fais :

My favorite piece of music is « Résistant » by « Iron sy ». It is rap music, this piece is very aggresiv and rude. I like this sound because it has great rythm and lyrics. He speaks about his life and i understand that his life not in step been easy. This music
raises hate, and it give me of dynamism. When i listen this sound i am very exited.

Pouvez vous me le corriger et me donner quelque autres astuces SVP, je vous en serez très reconnaissant. Merci a tous.