Demande de correction pour une lettre en Anglais

Bonjour,

J'ai rédiger une lettre en Anglais, mais comme je suis moyen en Anglais je fais appelle à vous pour voir si j'ai des fautes.

Merci d'avance

Dear Jhonny

I saw a report at TV, « The immigrants coming taking refuge at New York ».

I was taken by admiration for these people, to have the courage to leave their countries. In te report, he spoke a young girl to call Shanon Ryan. It is your Grandmother.

I would like to visit Los Angels and to see where yours Grandparents they lived at Hollywood. I read many on your Grandmother and I would like to do again your route.

What are the essential activity to do before to leave Los Angeles ?

I look forward to your reply.

Yours Sincerely


merci d'avance