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Yop tout le monde, pouvez-vous corriger mes erreurs Svp, je vous en serez très reconaissant:

What guides me for the choice of my clothes, is first the color of this clothe, i not
want pink or other color of this type. Indeed i like color back, white, dark blue.
Moneover i look at the mark, its important for me. I love wear the nice clothes, even if
some clothes without mark are nice. Thirdly the size is essential because i grow
timetable. I taking the size M. After, i try this clothe, if he correspond to me, i look at
the price. I am conscious that prices of certain clothes are very expensive. Its why i
thoughtful before to buy a clothe. So, what guides me are the color, mark, size and the
price of clothes.121 If this choices are respected, i could envisage to buy it 132. But
before to pass at the case, i would have tried it. Afterwards only i buy it.


Merci.

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Pakoo59 a écrit :

Yop tout le monde, pouvez-vous corriger mes erreurs Svp, je vous en serez très reconaissant:

What guides me for the choice of my clothes, is first the color of this clothe, i don't
want pink or other colors of this type. Indeed i like the colors back, white, dark blue.
Moneover i look at the markbrand, it's important for me. I love wearing the nice clothes, even if
some clothes without mark with no brand are nice. Thirdly the size is essential because i'm growing
timetable. I take the size M. After, i try this clothe, if he correspond to it suits me, i look at
the price. I am conscious that prices of certain clothes are very expensive. Its why i am
thoughtful before to buy buying a clothe. So, what guides me are the color, markbrand, size and the
price of clothes.121 If these choices are respected, i could envisageconsider to buy buying it 132. But before to pass at the casegoing to the cashdesk, i would have tried it. Afterwards only i buy it.


Merci.



N'hesite pas a ouvrir un dictionnaire anglais-francais quand tu doutes sur un mot plutot que tenter ta chance ;)

A part du vocabulaire qui te manquait/que tu n'utilisais pas bien, c'est pas trop mal.
Et attention aux temps.

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