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Dear Sir, Madam,
I'm a student in 3rd year in ****. I would like to join the European section in **** School.
I think the European class will allow me to become fluent.
Nowadays, too most many people's know how to speak English, it's the international language. We hear English everywhere: in a music, in a television series... <i>(I would like other ideas please!) in travels, at work</i>
I haven't yet a detailled professional project but I know learning English will give me a skill for my future career
Formule de politesse je ne sais pas exactement quoi mettre …
Yours faithfully
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Best regards
sinon t'as pas envie de voyager, ou tu rêves d'une super carrière dans une grosse compagnie internationale, ou sauver les baleines chez greenpeace en australie? ta lettre manque de rêve et de conviction... faut que t'y crois!!
bon courage