Anglais

bonjour à tous ! je suis très nulle en anglais depuis toujours et voila que je dois présenter un petit exposé à l oral devant tout le monde sur le port d'armes aux Etats Unis. Cela m aiderai beaucoup si quelqu'un pouvait lire mon texte et en dire les fautes, j ai tendance à traduire à la française. :s
merci


The authorisation of weapons
Have a weapons is authorize in United Stats but it's paradoxal. The people think of bein security because they have a weapons. Only the big problem, it's that everybody can take a weapon. That cause a lot of accidents.
Weapons are in american culture, at time of, they used their weapons forbid itself from Indian and savage animals. This two hundred million weapons circulates to United Stats only sixty-five million pistols and rifles are legal. In forty-six on fifty Stats, it is always legal to carry a weapons one on conditions that it is not visible.
have weapons at home when this children is very dangerous. Risk accidents is very big, some minuts of inattention and children isn't conscious of risk toy can kill himself or kill somebody. The number of accients doesn't stop increasing, a people haven't conscious of risk.
The used of firearms becomes comonplace Hollywood diffused this phenomenon almost everywhere in the world.
every year spend four hundred and fifty-five billion dollars on their military budget.
three bigger compagnies of armement to the world are all americans.

Bonjour,

Pourrais-tu écrire ton texte en français ensuite je t'aiderais à traduire.