Correction cv anglais

bonjour à tous!

je n'ai pas l'habitude de faire corriger mes écrits, mais je me dis qu'envoyer un CV avec plein de fautes ne jouera pas en ma faveur.
Donc si quelqu'un pouvait me le corriger ce serait vraiment gentil!

merci par avance!!

voici mon cv:


Education
2008-2009
First year in the EPF, Generalist engineering school
2006 à 2008
Two years in preparatory classes for entrance high school in the EPF,
2006
Baccalaureat Scientific (equivalent to A level).

Professional experiences
2006
Waiter in London, one month. « Acropolis restaurant »
Accommodate and serve the customers, priming some dishes, barman.
2003
Internship in a computerize firm for checks processing, two weeks « ICSB »
Sort of mail, research of archives, and involution for electronic maintenances.

Languages
French, native language.
English, good, both written and oral.
+ 2007: Waiter in London during one month.
+ 2006: English study holyday during two weeks.
+ 2001: Travel in Florida, during three weeks.

Spanish, good, both written and oral.

Computer skills
Office pack mastery (Word, Excel, PowerPoint)
Good programming knowledge (language C and Pascal).

Interests
Sports: water skiing, tennis.
Parachute jump initiation.
Hobbies: Music, cinema (two or three times a month).
Travels: multiples visits in England, Turkey, Florida, Kenya, Greece, island of Reunion, and island of Mauritius.