Correction Lettre Anglaise

Bonjour à tous !!
Voilà j'ai quelques difficultée avec l'anglais et je désirerais une aide pour la correction de cette lettre Merci

Dear Mr Patrick

How are you ?
Tanks you very much for your letter. Now I write you how we live in my country. We, the students, we live in a simple way. We follow lessons at days, and at night week, we go on balls, who are in ours villages. Many of we would to follow Graduate studies. Me for example, a so would like to follow my studies to become Professor of Economics. The Belgian students have a good ambition for their future, they would’ like to become someone.
We are dreamers, and we want to make the dreams to reality.

You in my city?
It’s a good question ! For an British, there is a problem with the language. Now a lot of people speak English, this is an international language. And an other problem, it’s a culture ! Have we same culture ?
First problem is with the car, We Belgian we drive in right, can people drink of tee, and we not have a same l'architecture.
For a British, to live in Belgian is not difficult.

See you soon.

Bonjour Dafen@IDN,
Je souhaiterais te remercier pour ton aide, je sais que l'anglais n'es pas mon fort, et jem'accroche pour cette derniére année d'anglais. Ton aide va m'apporté des points et je t'en remercie.
Par contre si un jour tu as besoin je te rendrais l'appareil, je suis juste douée en compta, et économie

Encore merci, et bonne soirée.