Correction anglais
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Voici un texte a rendre, je sais qu'il y a quelques , meme beaucoup de fautes, si vous pouvez m'aider à les corriger! Ca serait gentil 
I don't like pollution. And i hate people who don't respect the environment. Many people ( ne se préoccupent pas de la pollution). But the planet is in danger. and pollution is a danger for us, the environment and the world.
In the 90's a new notion was discoverded= a durable development. There were measures had took. At first, there is the protocol of Tokyo which against the global warming.
We are able to do many little efforts against pollution. For example, we put wn chewing gum or paper in the basket. And we should take the bus, or the bike to move. That is good for the planet, and for own health, our physical and mental.
Me, every morning I take my beautiful green and pink bike to go to school. this is a good execise and I'm not pollute the planet. I don't like to see a someone in her car, lonelu. Everybody could to do a carpoding. Maybe people are not respectful, consciencious. However in my house, i separate the paper and the food in te basket.
In my opinion, on Tv, there aren't enough advertisments against pollution.
Si vous voulez modifer des choses n'hésitez pas!
MErci!
Il m'en faut un, pourtant
I don't like pollution. And i hate people who don't respect the environment. Many people don't care about the environment. But the planet is in danger. and pollution is a danger for humans,animals and the planet.(ca evite de repeter environment)
In the 90's a new notion was created
urable development. Measures were established to try and minimise the disaster. At first, there was the protocol of kyoto (pas tokyo) which is against global warming.
Everyone car make an effort. For example, we can put chewing gum or paper in the bin. And we should take the bus, or the bike to move. That is good for the planet, and for our physical and mental health.
Every morning I take my beautiful green and pink bike to go to school. this is a good execise and I don't pollute the planet. I don't like to see people in their cars by them selves. Everybody could carpool. Maybe people are not respectful, concensious. However in my house, i separate the paper and the food in te bin.
In my opinion, on Tv, there aren't enough advertisments against pollution.
Voila j'epere que c'est bon demande si tu as des question.
Vincenzo 1eS
Merci beaucoup
Il m'en faut un, pourtant Répondre à ssquirtrock
| Dafen@IDN a écrit : there was the protocol of kyoto => Kyoto protocols (ou agreements)
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bonsoir , vous serait-il possible de me dire comment on traduit "un moteur 2 temps en anglais ,of course, because i don't know ... thanks for your answer ... have good time . christophe 
