Correction expression écrite anglais, merci beaucoup.

Bonjour,Pourriez-vous corriger mon expression svp. J'ai beaucoup de mal avec les temps et reste trop acrochée à la synthaxe française ...Merci d'avance.(Niveau : Terminale)

Tell about a strange encounter you had when you were a child. Say what happened and how you reacted you may also imagine the story.
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I made a lot strange encounter when I was child but one of them remains ( stays ) an striking event of my existence.

It was a day as the others, I went shopping with my mother at Manchester. We paced up and down about ten shops. In one of them I tryed on several dresses when in the mirror I thought see my reflection yet it wasn’t me but an other girl! I uttered scream, it was very unsettling. Likeness was A person with such likeness was really astonishing and frightening. My mother said me besides that it will have confused me if the hair and clothing would not have been different I didn’t dare to approach this girl, I were under the shock but finally it is her which came towards me. She also had been struck by our resemblance, she immediately posed to me thousand and once questions. We have to discuss a few minutes then her mother and mine exchanged numbers so that the contact is kept. I always hear that each one had, some share in the world, somebody who resembled to him but I didn’t think of discovering this person one day. Since this really strange meeting we have learnt to know us and the fact that we are physically similar but mentally different reassures me, that frightened me to know that somebody resembled to me at this point.