Bonjour,
alors j'ai ecrit mon texte m'ai jaurais besoins d'aide pour une correction s'il vous plait. Je me suis aidez d'un traducteur car je ne suis pas très doué pour l'anglais j'espere que vous pourrez m'aide merci a l'avance.
Today was one day important for me and my father. My father organized me my first meeting with max. max was one of these customers, it came from time to time to make repair these shoes, I had crossed it very can of time because I am very taken by the school and my job. But dad me said much good of it.
Some days before our meeting max invited me to give me the place of return. We had returned has 14:00 not far from the shop of dad. My father did not cease to him of me repeated that max was a boy formidable, intelligent, and very quite high. infact my father held has what this man becomes my boyfriend. Of course me I had been done very beautiful for this first return, my father had give the most beautiful shoes of his shop to me. Right before leaving it did not cease repeating me has that it not I resembled has my mother the day of their meeting. Sobel did not seem to him very to enchant to see me leaving for this return with max but can imports me.
It was the hour of the departure, arrived at the corner of the street max awaited me close to a barouche. It was very romantic, because no other man had still offered a horse turn to me in the city. With the first glance max was not very charming, but my father had said to me not to trust with the first looks at. . Aboard barouche I was rather quiet but max knew to put to me at ease and does not have to cease being interested has me, which I to like, and what I wanted to make of my future life. And more last time and more I learned how to appreciate it. I liked its interior beauty enormously. It was charming, attentive and romantic all that a woman can await from a man. Before redpositing me close to at home max is to stop in a florist and a red rose offered to me to close our day, this gesture was so attentive that I could not refuse a second return.
Today is a very important day my father and I. My father fixed me an appointment with one of his customers named MAX. Although, He sometimes comes to my father's shop to have his shoes repaired I don't meet him often, because I am very busy studying and working (at/in et tu peux rajouter le nom de l'entreprise ou magasin ou ton titre de job).
However, my Dad keeps telling me how nice, smart and nice looking is Max.That's why I decided at last to meet him.
Couple of days before, Max phoned me to confirm me all the meeting details like the place and the time.
We had returned has 14:00 not far from the shop of dad. (qu'est-ce que tu veux dire????)
Actually, my Dad would be very pleased if Max and I could date (=sortir ensemble). So, for our first time, I dressed fashionably and my beloved Daddy lent me the most beautiful pair of shoes he had in his shop.
He found me as pretty as my mother when they first met long time ago.
Sobel doesn't seem to be very happy about the idea of Max becoming my boyfriend but I don't care.
It's time to go!
I arrived at the corner of the street and Max was waiting for me, standing next to a hackney carriage (horse-drawn)(a barouche = cariole, fiacre????). It was very romantic, because no other man had never offered me a horse drawn ride in the city before. At the first sight, Max was not very handsome and charming(=beau pour un mec), but my father told me not to believe at my fisrt impressions and let the thing goes by!
During the city tour, I was rather quiet but Max knew how to make myself conformtable. He kept asking me a bunch of questions, as he wanted to know everything about me, like my hobbies, my studies and my future.
As time went by, I started to like me , more for his inside feelings and temper than his physical looking.
He has the qualites a woman is looking for :charm, attenton and romantism.MLax is the perfect gentleman!
Before to drop me at home, Max stop by a florsit's to offer me a beautiful red rose, ...a romantic way to say goodbye. That' was really cute (=mignon)!
Vivant au Québec, je me défends pas trop mal en Anglais...J'espère que la traduction arrangée te conviendras!
Enretour, cela serait sympa si tu pouvais m'aider avec mon Devoir de français : je dois écrire une nouvelle policière de 2 pages avec un faux-aveugle dans une bibliothèque avec une ambiance mysrtérieuse...et moi je n'ai pas d'idée...Je sèche, merci de ton aide possible.
Thibault_03
| thibault_03 a écrit : Vivant au Québec, je me défends pas trop mal en Anglais...J'espère que la traduction arrangée te conviendras!
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merci pour ton aide....alors pour toi c'est assez compliquer la...mdr un faux aveugle?? donc il fait semblant??
Donc avec une ambiance mystérieuse, moi j'essayerai de décrire les lieux en disant que c'est une grande grande bibliothèque très silencieuse et assez sombre...Qu'il y avait très peut de personnes présentent sur les lieux....après tu peut faire genre que le le personnage aveugle fait semblant d'être aveugle car il essaye d'approcher une fille qu'il voit souvent a la bibliothèque mais en s'aventurant dans la bibliothèque il vont tomber sur une pièce bizarre ou il vont rentré é voila je c pas du tout....
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