lettre de motivation anglais

bonjour
voila j'ai une lettre de motivation a envoyer en anglais a un organisme pour un stage à l'ile maurice,je l'ai ecrite, mais je suppose qu'une vérification s'impose.
si une ame généreuse pouvait avoir le courage de m'aider a corriger, je le remercie d'avance

After looking at your website, I have the honor of sending my application for a course of six months in Mauritius.
Nowadays, I’m in my first year of DUT marketing in Saint-Etienne and as I don’t want to continue in this way, I wish before starting a new school year to take advantage of this year to acquiere a personal and work experience.I’m hoping to make the best choice for the future and then re-enter a satisfactory school program.
My work experience allowed me to familiarize with the working world.My interest in the English langage developed since secondary school as well as a school trips to the United-States.That’s why a training course in the Mauricius.
I have the desire to live an enriching experience.Furthermore, the linguistic enrichment this course can offer me would be a benefict for my education

I join you my resume

I’m looking torward to receiving your reply