anglais besoin dune correction

Bonjour,
jai un gros problème avec la rédaction en anglaiS....pourriez vous corriger mes fautes svp?

merci davance

Kirsten does not like to tell to people what she does if she cannot avoid the question, she says she is a teacher who is partly true. She is a a university graduate with qualification in geography and physical training and she is in charge of the physical trainig of the staffs at the ministry og the interior where she had worked for seven years. In fact Kirsten is one of the fewx professional female bodyguards and holds the rank of captin. She protected many famous women and celebrities from queens and first ladies to pop singers and film stars. On duty she wears a classic suit and looks like any other smart women in the crowd. I never thought of beeing a bodyguard she says, it just happened I was working in a gym and some bodyguards saw me and asked if I'd like to work with them. Now I would not want to do anything else. She does not think she is brave all humans are afraid of something she says, what is important is to learn to control your fear I think ony of protect the women. I have to accompany and facing challenges gives me a lot of pleasure.