Anglais: correction d'une traduction

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I completed a six-week work placement within a company called informaticsystem and located in paris.

This is a small firm which specializes in sells and informatics hardware repairing
The first week, to adapt me at the activity of the society, I worked with the after sells services.
At the follow week I received the ordered hardware and I began my project

My project rests on the installation of a mail server with the selected software:
-the OS Windows 2003 server small business edition
-Windows exchange 2003 server (the messaging server)
-Microsoft outlook 2003 in each computer customer

And with the ordered hardware:
-a server in the range HP proliant
-Two hard disk of 160 gigabytes in raid 1 (mirroring)

To put in place this server, most difficult was to configure Microsoft Exchange because it requires a lot of adjustments.

Finally, users can now send and receive their message by local server.
Thanks to this training course I improved my knowledge and my experiment.
Moreover, I found this activity very interesting.

To conclude, I want to thank my tutor for having helped me on some technical points of the activity.