Probleme en anglais

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Eddie Murphy is born in Brooklyn, New York. Its family moves in Roosevelt, Long Island, where Murphy with the practice to go to school. Its taste for humour increases very quickly, and Murphy is famous at the school for his imitations and his jokes. It smells very quickly that its humour can lead it far and very early seeks to occur in front of a public. It is convinced to make career in the show business. In 1980, Murphy is 19 years old, it passes a series of hearings to take part in the program televised comic Saturday Night Live.
Eddie Murphy became famous in the United States thanks to his comic roles. Then, its celebrity reached the world thanks to her roles in the cop of Beverly Hills, Professor Foldingue and Dreamgirls.
The chain Comedy Central classifies it with the tenth rank of largest comic American of all times.
I like Eddy Murphy because it started from nothing and it arrived far. It made me laugh since my childhood. A humour which I often tried to imitate when I was small.

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where Murphy with the practice to go to school. Its taste for humour increases very quickly, and Murphy is famous at the school for his imitations and his jokes. It smells very quickly that its humour can lead it far and very early seeks to occur in front of a public. It is convinced to make career in the show business. In 1980, Murphy was 19 years, he passed a series of hearings to take part in the program televised comic Saturday Night Live.Eddie Murphy became famous in the United States thanks to his comic roles. Then, its celebrity reached the world thanks to her roles in the cop of Beverly Hills, Professor Foldingue and Dreamgirls. Eddie Murphy is married with producing cinema, Tracey Edmonds and is divorced Nicole Mitchell Murphy with whom he had five children. The chain Comedy Central classifies it with the tenth rank of largest comic American of all times. In 2007, Murphy made the voice of the character of the Ass in Shrek which be a very great success near young person. I like Eddy Murphy because he started from nothing and hee arrived far. It made me laugh since my childhood. Its films did not only make me laugh with me but especially all my family which likes to look at Eddy murphy. A humour which I often tried to imitate when I was small.

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