correction lettre en anglais
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Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin d'un petit coup de main...
Voila, je projette de faire un service volontaire européen mais seul hic, les lettres de motivation sont a faire en anglais et l'anglais je l'ai un peu oublié!!!
Si quelqu'un voudrait bien jetter un coup d'oeil a ma lettre pour corriger les éventuelles erreurs de syntaxe, vocabulaire et temps...En fin de compte, un peu tout!!!
Merci!!
La voila...
Dear…
I am very interested in the « European awareness » project (ref…) that you propose through the European Voluntary Service. In fact, this project corresponds to important values for me like open mindedness, esteem, altruism and intercultural experiences. Furthermore, we must to work with young people.
During my schooling, I graduate social degree in sociology and project coordination. Thanks to these studying I have experiences in animation, I have already worked in cultural and social center where students came to practice sports, do their homework and organize a lot of projects.
Moreover, this year I am volunteer in France with the association “Unis Cité” which it laud the Civil Voluntary Service. Like this, the values of voluntary such as involvement and solidarity are totally incorporated in my mind and I am capable to introduce it at other young.
Finally, thanks to my degrees and background I think I have proficiency in team work, organization of projects, communication and cooperation. Besides, I am flexible to work with young people in different background.
Now, I would really like to gain experience from working in a different country. I think that this challenge could be rewarding for me.
Turkey is a country that I want to discover. Turkish language, cultures and patrimony are things that I want to learn. Like this, I want to meet local population and travel in a lot of cities of country.
I would be happy to start working with you anytime after the 1st of November. Thus, I would really appreciate if you could let me know if you are interested in my application by the end of August.
I am looking forward to act together.
Sincerely yours.
J'aurais besoin d'un petit coup de main...
Voila, je projette de faire un service volontaire européen mais seul hic, les lettres de motivation sont a faire en anglais et l'anglais je l'ai un peu oublié!!!
Si quelqu'un voudrait bien jetter un coup d'oeil a ma lettre pour corriger les éventuelles erreurs de syntaxe, vocabulaire et temps...En fin de compte, un peu tout!!!
Merci!!
La voila...
Dear…
I am very interested in the « European awareness » project (ref…) that you propose through the European Voluntary Service. In fact, this project corresponds to important values for me like open mindedness, esteem, altruism and intercultural experiences. Furthermore, we must to work with young people.
During my schooling, I graduate social degree in sociology and project coordination. Thanks to these studying I have experiences in animation, I have already worked in cultural and social center where students came to practice sports, do their homework and organize a lot of projects.
Moreover, this year I am volunteer in France with the association “Unis Cité” which it laud the Civil Voluntary Service. Like this, the values of voluntary such as involvement and solidarity are totally incorporated in my mind and I am capable to introduce it at other young.
Finally, thanks to my degrees and background I think I have proficiency in team work, organization of projects, communication and cooperation. Besides, I am flexible to work with young people in different background.
Now, I would really like to gain experience from working in a different country. I think that this challenge could be rewarding for me.
Turkey is a country that I want to discover. Turkish language, cultures and patrimony are things that I want to learn. Like this, I want to meet local population and travel in a lot of cities of country.
I would be happy to start working with you anytime after the 1st of November. Thus, I would really appreciate if you could let me know if you are interested in my application by the end of August.
I am looking forward to act together.
Sincerely yours.
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Salut
Dans le sens où tu postules pour un emploi à l'étranger, je te conseille de te rendre sur des forums/sites anglais qui pourront mieux t'aider. (mise en page, formule de politesse,etc...)
Sinon pour ce qui est des fautes:
- to propose someone: demander quelqu'un en mariage.
Le sens "proposer" est donné par "to offer"
-mindedness: vérifie mais je ne pense pas que ça existe. (ou alors contourne le problème: "...for me like having an open mind...")
-"We must work with"--> Il n'y a pas de to après must. Tu peux dire par contre: We've to work with... (par contre le sens de cette phrase est flou, ce n'est pas rattaché à ce que tu dis avant. Tu devrais développer ce point ,"pourquoi devons nous travailler avec les jeunes..")
- "I graduatED a social degree and a project coordination one." C'est au passé; tu répètes 2 fois "social".
- "Studying": on dit studies.
- On dit: "I have earned experience".
-"where students came to practice sports, do their homework and organize a lot of projects. ": tu commences ton texte au passé, les verbes qui suivent le sont donc aussi. (did, organized).
- "Moreover, this year I am volunteer in France". Since that year.
- "with the association “Unis Cité” which laudS the Civil Voluntary Service." Pas besoin du "it" et 3eme personne donc un S à laud.
- "to introduce it.." to teach it to any young people.
J'arrête là pour aujourd'hui![:p]( ":p")
Dans le sens où tu postules pour un emploi à l'étranger, je te conseille de te rendre sur des forums/sites anglais qui pourront mieux t'aider. (mise en page, formule de politesse,etc...)
Sinon pour ce qui est des fautes:
- to propose someone: demander quelqu'un en mariage.
Le sens "proposer" est donné par "to offer"
-mindedness: vérifie mais je ne pense pas que ça existe. (ou alors contourne le problème: "...for me like having an open mind...")
-"We must work with"--> Il n'y a pas de to après must. Tu peux dire par contre: We've to work with... (par contre le sens de cette phrase est flou, ce n'est pas rattaché à ce que tu dis avant. Tu devrais développer ce point ,"pourquoi devons nous travailler avec les jeunes..")
- "I graduatED a social degree and a project coordination one." C'est au passé; tu répètes 2 fois "social".
- "Studying": on dit studies.
- On dit: "I have earned experience".
-"where students came to practice sports, do their homework and organize a lot of projects. ": tu commences ton texte au passé, les verbes qui suivent le sont donc aussi. (did, organized).
- "Moreover, this year I am volunteer in France". Since that year.
- "with the association “Unis Cité” which laudS the Civil Voluntary Service." Pas besoin du "it" et 3eme personne donc un S à laud.
- "to introduce it.." to teach it to any young people.
J'arrête là pour aujourd'hui
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