Correction d'une lettre de motivation et d'un CV en Anglais

Bonjour,

Je suis nouveau. J'aurai besoin de vous pour m'assurer que ma lettre de motivation et mon CV ne comportent pas de faute de grammaire ou de syntaxe. Et si vous pouviez me donner de conseils (sur ce que je devrai retirer ou mettre ) , je suis prenneur !

Voici ma lettre de motivation :

Adrien ******
7 résidence ****
14000 Caen FRANCE
02 31 ***** ( home )
06 74 56 **** ( mobile )

6 May 2008

CEI club des 4 Vents
1 rue Gozlin
75006 Paris


Dear Mr or Mrs,

I found your internet site by seeking for a job in Great-Britain on google.com . I have seen that it could be possible for your agency to do that work of seeking for me, by means of the "start up" program, and I should like to be considered for that.

I am presently studying in an " école préparatoire (preparing school) aux grandes écoles économique et commerciale option économique ". This kind of school prepare the studients to "grandes écoles" ( "greats schools" )'s contests. Only the best studients can enter in this great schools. Among the tests, the english one is a very important proof. For that reasons I am seriously motivated to improve my english level the better I can, and I personally think that working in England during two months is the best method to do this.
Besides, I went to Great Britain four times, of which two times in England, and I am very attracted by the open-mind and courtesy of the British citizens.
To finish, although I never had a job before, I think that the strictness of working teached in preparing schools is a good asset for me.

Please find enclosed a copy of my CV and a copy of my english teacher testimonial. I am fully prepared to be available for interview at your convenience.

Yours sincerely

Adrien *******




Voici mon CV :

Adrien ******
7 résidence ******
14000 Caen
France


As part of my course's curriculum :

- Baccalauréat générale séction Economique et Sociale

- First year in Ecole préparatoire Economique et Commerciale option Economique

Habilities :

- Good english level

- Good spanish level

Hobbies :

- I play guitar for 6 years , and piano for 3 years.

- I wrote compositions with a band, and organised concerts.

- Travelling : I went in Great Britain two times , in Irland, in Scotland, in Spain, in Finland, in Germany, in Hungary, etc...



J'éspère de tout coeur que vous aurez le temps de me répondre !

Aurevoir.

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