rédaction d'anglais à corriger

Quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ma rédaction d'anglais?? je sais qu'elle est longue mais ce serait simpa SVP

The Empire State Building sites at the height of Manhattan, on the fifth avenue at the 33 and 34 street's corner.
This architecture Art Deco's symbol rises of 443 metre and count 102 floors.
He houses two observatories in the 86th and 102nd floors which have accomodated more than 117 million persons to date.
Since the Attacks' Attempts of the September 11th 2001 against the World Trade Center's twins towers, the skyscraper takes back his former position of the New York's tallest tower. He houses approximately fifteen thousand working-classes today.
A television aerial from 65 metre, installed in 1985, surmounts the tower.
His blaze serves to landmark to planes.
The Empire State Building is the rivlary's between Walter Chrysler and John Jakob Raskob effect. The two billionaires hoped build the New York's tallest edifice. John Jakob Raskob associated him with four anothers persons for create the Empire State Building in 1929. They named Alfred E. Smith at the compagny's lead.
The groundworks started the Januar 22nd 1930. The structure progressing at the rhythm of 4,5 floors a week, has been realize in one year and 45 days.
The project's all-over cost, which needed 7 million work hours, was very precisely of 40 948 900 dollars.
The President Hoover made an opening, from Washington D. C., the Empire State Building the May 1st 1931.
Due to the orisis, the tower has known major problems to find tenants and has been nicknamed Empty State Building.

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