Redaction d'anglais :-/

Bonjour vous tous ! =)

J'ai une redaction sur ma ville a faire . . J'suis pas très très douée en anglais (Ou alors, c'est ma prof' qui a une dent contre moi . . ^_^ )

En tous cas, j'aimerais bien que vous corrigier un peu mes erreurs ( Et je vous assure qu'il y en aura quelques unes. . Humph' ) Et m'aider a les apprendre.
Merci d'avance.

Voici :


I will describe you the little town where I live for more than eleven years : ***. First, I will give you a general description of my town. Then, I will list its advantages and disadvantages, say what I like, or dislike, about my town. To conclude, I will add an anecdote.


*** reassemble around 7,000 inhabitants who are named “***”. *** is a twenty-minute drive Boulogne but, The school bus arrives at 6.45 in my street and takes forty-five minutes to go to Branly! It’s a big disadvantage when you take bus every morning of the week!
Some people say *** is too quiet but I don’t like the agitation of big cities, so *** is a perfect town to me! This is a small town but there are around fifty shops and bars.


If you want to see films or read books, you can go to the cinema or to the library. Also, the swimming pool is always opened. People, and some English usually come to *** beauce of its clock and its “House of Faïence”.


What I like most about my city is the park near my house. There are always people and I often go there with friends.


The principal advantage of my city is its calmness : It’s only a small town of Pas-de-Calais ! It’s not Paris and, as I said, I don’t like the noise of big cities. The landscape is rather beautiful even if there isn’t the Eiffel Tower : there are no skyscrapers!


The principal disadvantage of my city is its geographic situation. *** is distant of Boulogne and the others cities where my friends live. But, almost of my family live here so it’s not to bad.


Long ago, I must be five or six, I participated to a procession on the occasion of the 14th july. I was disguised as a big ladybird! It was a very good time to me because all my friends laughed. This is one of the funniest things that ever happened to me !