Rédaction d'anglais :s

Alors j'avais une suite de texte en anglais à faire d'environ 200 mots.

voila le texte original:

I WAS born a slave on a plantation in Franklin County, Virginia. I am not quite sure of the exact place or exact date of my birth, but at any rate I suspect I must have been born somewhere and at some time. As nearly as I have been able to learn, I was born near a cross-roads post-office called Hale's Ford, and the year was 1858 or 1859. I do not know the month or the day. The earliest impressions I can now recall are of the plantation and the slave quarters -- the latter being the part of the plantation where the slaves had their cabins.

My life had its beginning in the midst of the most miserable, desolate, and discouraging surroundings.

et ma suite...:





In this cabins I lived with my father, my two sisters and my litlle brother. At the begining my father didn't talk about my mother, my sisters knew that it was passed but didn't tell me.

I thought that the life was so difficult before my 7 years because i worked a lot in the cabins when my father and sisters were working, but in fact I was deceiving because the day of my 7 years began the hell of slavery, for the first one my father took me to the plantation.

I would always remember this day, under the (brulant) sun, I was uncoverring a new middle, that of the slavery, a few words that I had
understood during the meal and I was not comprising were, finding a sense, white disagreeable men who was passing rarely has cabins were becoming of bloody cruel dictator in cutlures, this unforgettable day or so many questions was coming me to the spirit was him therefore for an other reason.

Indeed my father was having jugeer that it was being as long as I would know what it was being occurred of my mother, it gives me to tell this terrible history that him one does suffer the whites, and I was beginning has hates without too to know what was being the society of this epoch.


Voila je suis en 1 ere S, et j'aimerais faire un truc pas mal pour garder ma moyenne d'anglais ou elle en est, alors si un ptit coup de main pour les fautes ne vous dérange pas se serait tres simpa de votre part^^.

merci de ton aide

Indeed my father was having jugeer that it was being as long as I would know what it was being occurred of my mother, it gives me to tell this terrible history that him one does suffer the whites, and I was beginning has hates without too to know what was being the society of this epoch.

voila en français ce que j'ai voulu dire:

En éffet mon père avait juger qu'il était temps que je sache(j'ai traduit ça comme je pouvais :s) ce qui était arrivé a ma mère. Il m'expliqua la terrible histoire qu'elle avait souffert des hommes blancs. Je commençais deja à hair sans trop la connaitre, ce qu'était la société de l'époque.