correction anglais

bonjour tout le monde,

voilà j'ai un devoir maison à faire en anglais, j'ai répondu aux questions, mais j'aimerais savoir si celles ci sont correctes (grammaticalement).
Merci d'avance pour vos corrections! mais je vous préviens l'anglais et moi ça fait 2!

1) this text is an autobiography because on the one hand it is write to the first person "I have", "my father", "me"... and on the other hand, we know that the main character's name is Despond Morris, like the author of this text. So it is an autobiography.

3) the main character is Morris Desmond, a young boy. he lived with his parents, but now (in the text) he studied on the boarding-school.
This boy is an only child, enough shy and reserved. He likes animals. indeed for him animals are his companions.
In this boarding-school, Buttercup is his zoology teacher. Buttercup is his nickname.

voilà j'éspère qu'il n'y a pas trop de fautes!

thank you
mimi

rapide correction,
si qqun d'autre veut apporter sa pierre à l'édifice...

Quelque petits corrections de plus

1) this text is an autobiography because IN the one hand it is....

he is studying at A Boarding School....

This boy is an only child, RATHER shy and reserved. He likes......

indeed, animals are company for him.......