bonjour,
voici un petit paragraphe que j'ai rédigé. Pouvez vous me le corriger s'il vous plait?
Sometimes I shall like to live in the nature and to wake up thanks to the sunlight.
But every morning, my waking rings and I hate this sound!!
Then I arise and I dress me. I wear my jeans, my pullover,my mantel and my shoes as well as my hat and my gloves because the winter is very cold in my country.
Some day I don't know why, but I'm late. However I take my breakfast quickly! Luckly, I haven't yet chlidren! Otherwise I wil be late all the time!
It's while a long day of works begin. I work ten hours a day from eight o'clock till eighteen o'clock.
After working, I'm going to buy food in the shop next at home.
After that I prepar my diner and when I eat, it's (déjà) ninety o'clock!
My life is very eventful! That why I sing about rest. Some evening I warch my favourite program on TV to relax and forget my work!
I love the confort of my flat. But I'm aware that my life is stressful. Maybe one day, I get tired of it (je veux dire peut être qu'un jour j'en aurai marre assez)
Sometimes I would like to live in a hot country and wake up with the sun shining. Every morning my alarm rings and I hate it. I get up and dress myself. I put on my jeans, my pullover, my shoes, my coat as well as my hat and gloves because the winter is very cold in my country.
Some days, I don't know why, I am late. I eat my breakfast quickly. Lukily I haven't any children yet otherwise I would be late all the time.
It's the start of a long working day or me. I work ten hours a day from eight in the morning until six in the evening.
After work I buy food in the shop near to my home, I prepare my diner and when I have eaten it, it is already nine o'clock.
My life is full of events ([]That's why I sing about rest) je ne sais pas[/] Every evening I watch my favourite programme on TV to relax and forget my work. I love my flat, it is very comortable. I am aware that my life to stressful. Maybe one day I will get tired of it.
( it ) j'espere que c'est ton appartement et pas ta vie!!!!!
J'ai fait mon meiux sans trop changer votre texte!
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