rédaction anglais
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bonjour,
voici un petit paragraphe que j'ai rédigé. Pouvez vous me le corriger s'il vous plait?
Sometimes I shall like to live in the nature and to wake up thanks to the sunlight.
But every morning, my waking rings and I hate this sound!!
Then I arise and I dress me. I wear my jeans, my pullover,my mantel and my shoes as well as my hat and my gloves because the winter is very cold in my country.
Some day I don't know why, but I'm late. However I take my breakfast quickly! Luckly, I haven't yet chlidren! Otherwise I wil be late all the time!
It's while a long day of works begin. I work ten hours a day from eight o'clock till eighteen o'clock.
After working, I'm going to buy food in the shop next at home.
After that I prepar my diner and when I eat, it's (déjà) ninety o'clock!
My life is very eventful! That why I sing about rest. Some evening I warch my favourite program on TV to relax and forget my work!
I love the confort of my flat. But I'm aware that my life is stressful. Maybe one day, I get tired of it (je veux dire peut être qu'un jour j'en aurai marre assez)
merci d'avance,
latitechlotte
voici un petit paragraphe que j'ai rédigé. Pouvez vous me le corriger s'il vous plait?
Sometimes I shall like to live in the nature and to wake up thanks to the sunlight.
But every morning, my waking rings and I hate this sound!!
Then I arise and I dress me. I wear my jeans, my pullover,my mantel and my shoes as well as my hat and my gloves because the winter is very cold in my country.
Some day I don't know why, but I'm late. However I take my breakfast quickly! Luckly, I haven't yet chlidren! Otherwise I wil be late all the time!
It's while a long day of works begin. I work ten hours a day from eight o'clock till eighteen o'clock.
After working, I'm going to buy food in the shop next at home.
After that I prepar my diner and when I eat, it's (déjà) ninety o'clock!
My life is very eventful! That why I sing about rest. Some evening I warch my favourite program on TV to relax and forget my work!
I love the confort of my flat. But I'm aware that my life is stressful. Maybe one day, I get tired of it (je veux dire peut être qu'un jour j'en aurai marre assez)
merci d'avance,
latitechlotte
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Bonjour latitechlotte, For you ...
Sometimes I would like to live in a hot country and wake up with the sun shining. Every morning my alarm rings and I hate it. I get up and dress myself. I put on my jeans, my pullover, my shoes, my coat as well as my hat and gloves because the winter is very cold in my country.
Some days, I don't know why, I am late. I eat my breakfast quickly. Lukily I haven't any children yet otherwise I would be late all the time.
It's the start of a long working day or me. I work ten hours a day from eight in the morning until six in the evening.
After work I buy food in the shop near to my home, I prepare my diner and when I have eaten it, it is already nine o'clock.
My life is full of events ([]That's why I sing about rest) je ne sais pas[/] Every evening I watch my favourite programme on TV to relax and forget my work. I love my flat, it is very comortable. I am aware that my life to stressful. Maybe one day I will get tired of it.
( it ) j'espere que c'est ton appartement et pas ta vie!!!!!
J'ai fait mon meiux sans trop changer votre texte!
Sometimes I would like to live in a hot country and wake up with the sun shining. Every morning my alarm rings and I hate it. I get up and dress myself. I put on my jeans, my pullover, my shoes, my coat as well as my hat and gloves because the winter is very cold in my country.
Some days, I don't know why, I am late. I eat my breakfast quickly. Lukily I haven't any children yet otherwise I would be late all the time.
It's the start of a long working day or me. I work ten hours a day from eight in the morning until six in the evening.
After work I buy food in the shop near to my home, I prepare my diner and when I have eaten it, it is already nine o'clock.
My life is full of events ([]That's why I sing about rest) je ne sais pas[/] Every evening I watch my favourite programme on TV to relax and forget my work. I love my flat, it is very comortable. I am aware that my life to stressful. Maybe one day I will get tired of it.
( it ) j'espere que c'est ton appartement et pas ta vie!!!!!
J'ai fait mon meiux sans trop changer votre texte!
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