Bonjour pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Nowadays the technology takes a big place in our daily. So, can we live without technology ? To answer this question we are going to say why we can live without and why we can't.
On the one hand it's true that world won't die without technology ! We can see that in developing countries, most of the population haven't got access to technology, mobile phone or ecological car and they can live normally. The technology isn't vital. Moreover, some years ago people lived without much technology in the way they hadn't mobile phones for example. So on the whole we can survive without technology.
On the other hand it's difficult nowadays to live without technology, it's part of the evolution and also part of industrialization to our countries future because it's very useful as the mobile phone who allow us to keep in touch with ours friends, ours relatives or with work partners all the time and we can be contacted wherever we are because we are always reached ! moreover computer and the Internet are very useful for students to do researches or to chat with their friends. If the technology network would collapse, we would not believe how many people would panic on this sort of issue !
By way of conclusion we can say that nowadays we can't live without technology Even if the past generations had lived without her.
Thanks !
est-ce que tu aurais ton texte en francais aussi pour voir si ca correspond bien??
non ce n'est pas un texte à traduire c'est moi qui l'ai écrit et j'aimerai savoir si il y avait des fautes s'il vous plaît.
Nowadays Technology takes a big place in our daily life. So, can we live without technology ? To answer this question we'll explain why we can live without and why we can't.
On the one hand (l'expression de va pas du tout mais je ne me souviens plus de la bonne) it's true that world won't die without technology ! We can see that in industrialised countries, most of people don't have access to technology, mobile phones or ecological cars and they can live normally. Technology isn't essential. Moreover, a few years ago, people lived without much (le "tecnology" n'est pas quantifiable, il fait référence à quelque chose de général) technology, in the way they didn't have mobile phones for example. To sum up, we can survive without technology.
On the other hand it's difficult nowadays to live without technology, it's a part of Evolution and also part of industrialization of our countries in the future because it's very useful. The mobile phone which allows us to keep in touch with our friends, our relatives or with work partners all the time, and we also can be contacted wherever we are because we are always reached ! moreover computers and the Internet are very useful for students to do researches or to chat with their friends. If the technology network collapsed, we would not believe how many people would panic on this sort of issue ! (il y a un truc qui va pas dans ta phrase après la virgule, fo la reformuler)
To conclude we can say that in today society we can't live without technology, even if in the past generations had lived without it[strike][/strike].
Je ne sait que dire !!! Je pense que c'est la première et la dernière fois que je corrige un devoir d'anglais sur ce site. Excuse moi je n'espère pas te vexer en disant cela, mais tu dois revoir la conjugaison, la grammaire et la bonne utilisation du dictionnaire. Si tu n'as pas la patience de faire tout ça regarde des films VO sous-titrés et essaie de faire des phrases courtes.
PS: je ne suis pas sûre de toutes les corrections que j'ai faites, néanmoins je suis sûre de toutes les erreurs que j'ai mises en lumière et j'en ai même oubliées.
merci beaucoup ! cependant tu me corriges des choses qui sont bonnes car elles ont été vues en cours ! mais merci beaucoup quand même !
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