Devoir d'anglais

Coucou, j'ai un devoir a faire. Donc il fallait que je décrive la personne de mon choix en anglais. Il doit y avoir pas mal de faute, je suis pas vraiment brillante dans cette matière. pouvez vous m'aider à les corriger ?

Voila ce que je propose :

To answer this exercise, I decided to describe one of the persons who matters most to me, my best friend.

She is tall, thin and elegant, always dressed up in the latest fashion. Her long hair is clear, so are her eyes. Her gaze is very expressive and says a lot about her thoughts. Her face is rather round, which makes her look like a child despite all the wisdom she tries to bring out. She is feminine while keeping a masculine side she has always had. She is not the type to wear high heeled shoes, but it does not mean that her flat heeled shoes do not attract boys around her.


She's the kind of person who's got a strong personality. She always wants to be right and does not accept criticism. She is modest in no way and that makes all her charm. In her view, she is pretty, intelligent and few people deserve her attention. Nevertheless, she is very endearing, and it is with her that I shared the strongest moments in my life. She was with me in any circumstances. So, behind her appearance of an independent, cold and emotional girl, she is still someone caring, loving and indispensable to me.

She has been living in Paris since September and has studied international trade. Her boyfriend also lives there. They have known each other for one year now and everything is going well. She will come down to Perpignan for Christmas and we shall again be reunited all together, her family, her and me.




Merci d'avance ^^