Correction résumé d'anglais

Bonjour,
J'ai un résumé d'anglais à réaliser et je ne suis pas du tout sur de mon niveau, si quelqu'un aurait la gentilesse de regarder voir ce qui ne va pas.
Merci d'avance.

Go at college, it is a dream for some of you. But, it is hard in lots of countries because generally numbers of sites is limited and tuition fees are expensive. So, I will compare the different university funding systems in a first time, and I will show the contrast with French university.
You have countries where it is difficult to go at college if you are not rich or a good pupil, like in USA or in Australia. In fact, grants are based on your merit and tuition fees are expensive, so, you must take a student loan to finance your study. By contrast, in India, there is social selection at university same if tuition fees are low, there is no grants for the poor families. On the contrary, in Germany or in Denmark, the intake are numerous because there is no selection, tuitions fees are free and you have grants to pay your accommodation.
In France, university system is like Germany because there is no selection and you can have grants. It is affordable but tuition fees increase and in the future, with the “LRU law”, they will be worse because university will decide what fees they want.
To conclude, there is much contrast in the different university funding systems in the world.

for some of you -> pour certains d'entre vous

Merci beaucoup d'avoir prit du temps pour ça.
The intakes -> les admissions