Could you please help me with my french text?
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Could please help me with my french text? I love French, and I made an effort with this text. I tried some more advanced sentences this time, if I'am wrong on some of them, could you please write why it's wrong? That way I can learn better french. Merci.
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Cava?
Could please help me with my french text? I love French, and I made an effort with this text. I tried some more advanced sentences this time, if I'am wrong on some of them, could you please write why it's wrong? That way I can learn better french. Merci.
Merci beaucoup
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Hi I think I've partialy get what you want to write.
La semaine
Vendredi je ferai mes devoirs puis je regarderai un film avec mon copain après l'avoir invité par téléphone.
Mes parents travaillent pendant la semaine mais mon frère sera à la maison.Après en avoir parlé avec mon copain nous irons au centre ville, à Belsvik Match.
Samedi j'irais m'entrainer au Hakons Hall Sportcenter.Ca va me fatiguer mais je me prendrai une limonade et une pomme.Je vais vraiment m'entrainer dur.
Au centre sportif je vais sûrement voir Mona , c'est une fille très féminine qui se maquille beaucoup et souvent.Je l'aime.
Dimanche je continuerai mes devoir.
Just one thing : if you want to describe the weekend , you can use 'weekend' or 'fin de semaine'.
Citation :
La semaine
Vendredi je ferai mes devoirs puis je regarderai un film avec mon copain après l'avoir invité par téléphone.
Mes parents travaillent pendant la semaine mais mon frère sera à la maison.Après en avoir parlé avec mon copain nous irons au centre ville, à Belsvik Match.
Samedi j'irais m'entrainer au Hakons Hall Sportcenter.Ca va me fatiguer mais je me prendrai une limonade et une pomme.Je vais vraiment m'entrainer dur.
Au centre sportif je vais sûrement voir Mona , c'est une fille très féminine qui se maquille beaucoup et souvent.Je l'aime.
Dimanche je continuerai mes devoir.
Just one thing : if you want to describe the weekend , you can use 'weekend' or 'fin de semaine'.
I hope i 've understood your wish, so you 'll find here your text in French (and if i 'm able) the same text in your own (strangeand funny) French so you'll see what you're really writing.
Ready ?
GO
That's my French's translation.
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Vendredi je ferai mes devoirs et regarderai un film .Mon ami, téléphone moi afin que nous regardions un film ensemble.En ira beaucoup (wow ! what is it ? maybe you're trying to say " There will be a lot " then you better write: "Il y en aura beaucoup").Mon père et ma mère travaillent cette semaine mais mon frère restera à la maison.Durant cette semaine je parlerai avec mon copain (ami).Lui et moi, nous irons dans le centre ville.Dans le centre ville j'irai a Belsvik Match et j'essaierai une veste.Elle sera parfaite .Samedi j'irai faire de l'exercice.J'irai à Haron HAll SportCenter.Je viendrai afreux lent (means nothing, you maybe say: J'irai très lentement , (i'll go slowly).Je m'entrainerai dur (beaucoup).J'achèterai aussi des pommes. Au centre je rencontrerai un fille.Il y a une fille qui se maquille toujours beaucoup.Elle s'appelle Mona et je l'aime. Dimanche je ferai mes devoirs.
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That's what a French understand , reading your text
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To Friday i'll do my duties and watch a movie. My friend, you call yourself me for we will look a bit movie. There will go a lot. My father and my mother were working for to week.But my brother stayed to home.To the week i'll talk to my friend.Me and my friend we'll go to the downtown.At the downtown i was at Belvisk Match and i'll saw at theyr jacket.It will be too much too.
To Saturday i'll do a bit exercise.There will be to Hakons Hall SportCenter.I'll come bad slow from center.The center will sold limonade.I'll practice him hard.I'll sell too a bit of apple.At the center i'll meet a girl. He got a girl who make herself up a lot and frequently.Her name is Mona, and i love her.To the Sundac i'll be my duties.
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Funny, isn't it ?
As you can see my friend, you need to work hard your French (and i surely have to work hard my English....)
But i'm glad if it helps you to do YOUR French's duties , hooligan !
Ready ?
GO
That's my French's translation.
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Vendredi je ferai mes devoirs et regarderai un film .Mon ami, téléphone moi afin que nous regardions un film ensemble.En ira beaucoup (wow ! what is it ? maybe you're trying to say " There will be a lot " then you better write: "Il y en aura beaucoup").Mon père et ma mère travaillent cette semaine mais mon frère restera à la maison.Durant cette semaine je parlerai avec mon copain (ami).Lui et moi, nous irons dans le centre ville.Dans le centre ville j'irai a Belsvik Match et j'essaierai une veste.Elle sera parfaite .Samedi j'irai faire de l'exercice.J'irai à Haron HAll SportCenter.Je viendrai afreux lent (means nothing, you maybe say: J'irai très lentement , (i'll go slowly).Je m'entrainerai dur (beaucoup).J'achèterai aussi des pommes. Au centre je rencontrerai un fille.Il y a une fille qui se maquille toujours beaucoup.Elle s'appelle Mona et je l'aime. Dimanche je ferai mes devoirs.
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That's what a French understand , reading your text
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To Friday i'll do my duties and watch a movie. My friend, you call yourself me for we will look a bit movie. There will go a lot. My father and my mother were working for to week.But my brother stayed to home.To the week i'll talk to my friend.Me and my friend we'll go to the downtown.At the downtown i was at Belvisk Match and i'll saw at theyr jacket.It will be too much too.
To Saturday i'll do a bit exercise.There will be to Hakons Hall SportCenter.I'll come bad slow from center.The center will sold limonade.I'll practice him hard.I'll sell too a bit of apple.At the center i'll meet a girl. He got a girl who make herself up a lot and frequently.Her name is Mona, and i love her.To the Sundac i'll be my duties.
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Funny, isn't it ?
As you can see my friend, you need to work hard your French (and i surely have to work hard my English....)
But i'm glad if it helps you to do YOUR French's duties , hooligan !
, I've changed my text a bit, is this more correct?
I'm French and by the way i never learnt English at school)
But i gave you yesterday ( and PauloVilla did the same, and surely better i think) and you didn't read our answers at all.
You came back and said :"Hello, thanks , did i do better now ?"
How could you think you did better if you even didn't read our answers.![:pt1cable:]( ":pt1cable:")
I have to add that if you read our translations 'word by word' you"ll understand perfectly where are your mistakes and your good sentences .
That's why i was a little angry, not more than with a student who don't read his dutie's corrections and ask "Am i good now?"!
I just want to say that you better do as i did:
You buy a half-ton of English's songs and you do yourself your own translation , you'll be quickly improved .
Bye .(and don't worry, i wasn't bad, just a little 'Oh ! My God, this one is jocking !")
By the way, i'm glad, because i saw you understood so fine my precedent text(i mean this one which begin by "Dieu protégez nous.....)
Though, it was not so easy.
Maybe you are better when you're a bit offended, what you think ?
Bye.![:wahoo:]( ":wahoo:")
But i gave you yesterday ( and PauloVilla did the same, and surely better i think) and you didn't read our answers at all.
You came back and said :"Hello, thanks , did i do better now ?"
How could you think you did better if you even didn't read our answers.
I have to add that if you read our translations 'word by word' you"ll understand perfectly where are your mistakes and your good sentences .
That's why i was a little angry, not more than with a student who don't read his dutie's corrections and ask "Am i good now?"!
I just want to say that you better do as i did:
You buy a half-ton of English's songs and you do yourself your own translation , you'll be quickly improved .
Bye .(and don't worry, i wasn't bad, just a little 'Oh ! My God, this one is jocking !")
By the way, i'm glad, because i saw you understood so fine my precedent text(i mean this one which begin by "Dieu protégez nous.....)
Though, it was not so easy.
Maybe you are better when you're a bit offended, what you think ?
Bye.
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