AIDEZ MOI, petite correction d'ANGLAIS

Bonjour à tous! J'ai une expression d'anglais à rendre et elle est vraiment trés importante pour ma moyenne, si je n'ai pas une bonne note, je ne pourrais rattraper ma mauvaise note précédente... je suis pas bilingue donc il doit y avoir pas mal de faute ce serait vraiment sympa si vous pouviez y jetter un coup d'oeil et me corriger un peu.
merci d'avance



- I let you thinking about my proposal, now, you’ve to tell me what you are decided.
-I thought a lot before giving you my decision, I envisaged it of several manners and now,
I go to say what's in my mind. Something about with us doesn't seem right. Differences keeps getting in the way. there is so much differences between us, a so big gap that I am not able to cross and because of this difference I can only refuse your proposal. I can say to you all these reasons for which I refuse it but I think that nothing will really satisfy you, but I implore you to think that it is what’s best for me. it is impossible to me to succeed surpassing this obstacle.

We were born in two different worlds. you are Muslim and me, i’m Christian and it is a big difference. Even so at the beginning we would consider it to be an adventure, later it would be us only moving away. For us, it is impossible to change our opinion. My religion makes me what I am, I cannot disavow it. We’re living with and according to our beliefs and it is not something that we can change. I would be unable to play usages which I would not understand, that are not mine and therefore I would not see interest.
Besides, I was born in this country, I always lived here, my roots are here, my family and all what’s important for me is here. All my life is in England and I cannot leave all this overnight. I would be unhappy in a country which is not mine, where there is a culture different from mine and where I would not have my friends and my family. I can’t stand being separated of people who counts for me.
I either do not want to disavow my mother tongue and to learn other one, I like my country and even if I cares for you, nothing in the world could make me leave it.

Everything compares us, our country, our language, our culture and our religion. Even if we believe in it, it is necessary to be realistic and to suppose that he is impossible to surpass it, it is necessary to see the truth.
I've to stay here and be who I am. I just don't belong over there. I hope you understand that I Don't wanna leave it all behind. But even if I would get my hopes up. I would watch them fall everytime. I'm staying today because I've gotta do what's best for me.
I would never ask you to change yout life for me, I ask you therefore to accept that I do not make it for you, if you cares for me, you must try to understand me.
go back to your country and keep in memory only a pretty history.

- i’m trying to understand but thank you very much for telling me the truth and for giving me explication. I was looking forward to going in my country with you but i have not thought about difficulties for you and after reflexion i’m thinking i agree with you even if it’s so difficult for me to accept your decision.

personne aurait un petit momen pour jetter un coup doeil? sil vous plait c vraimen importan :s