Citation :
Marc lives in London, he is 17 .He likes fashion and is a punk but his parent
s don’t like his style and criticize him.One day, Marc wore very out of fashion and casual.And his father say :
father- Where dou you go with th
ese clothes ?
Marc - I am going to the flea
market for buy second-hand clothes who aren’t too
expensive .
His father – Why dou you buy your clothes to the flea
market ,if you need money, i can give
you money, but don’t buy casual und out of fashion clothes.
Marc - But I like my style, the style that you want is ridiculous.
His father - Your are very comic, if you continue to buy
punk clothes, I don't give you money, you
will must
buy your clothes with your pocket money.
Marc -I like my style, and I don’t want to change my style,because I want to be different
like some young people .You like brand name clothes but me not, with brand names
clothes all look the same .I will continue to buy my clothes with my pocket money.
His father -
As you want.
Voilà, j'ai essayé de te corriger quelques fautes, mais j'suis pas sûr pour tout, j'ai qu'un niveau seconde en Anglais.
Par contre, je trouve que tu fais beaucoup de répétitions, c'est pas faux mais pas forcément très bien, surtout pour ton prof....