Aide en Anglais.

Bonjour, J'ai un petit exercice a faire, fallait que je raconte une petite dispute, entre adolescent et ses parents, je l'ai faite, mais je sais pas si j'ai fais des fautes, est-ce-que quelqu'un pourrait corriger les petites fautes de grammaire ou orthographe qui s'y trouvent, Merci.

Writing task : Imagine an argument between a teenager and his parents about the way he is dressed.

Marc lives in London, he is 17 .He likes fashion and is a punk but his parent don’t like his style and criticize him.One day, Marc wore very out of fashion and casual.And his father say :

father- Where dou you go with this clothes ?

Marc - I am going to the flea markekts for buy second-hand clothes who aren’t too
expensive .
His father – Why dou you buy your clothes to the flea markets ,if you need money, i can give
you money, but don’t buy casual und out of fashion clothes.
Marc - But I like my style, the style that you want is ridiculous.
His father - Your are very comic, if you continue to buy punk’s clothes, I given’t too money, you
will must to buy your clothes with your pocket money.
Marc -I like my style, and I don’t want to change my style,because I want to be different
like some young people .You like brand name clothes but me not, with brand names
clothes all look the same .I will continue to buy my clothes with my pocket money.
His father -Like you want.



And Marc will buy his clothes with his pocket money, as long as Marc will change
his style, his father will give
money for Marc..

Merci beacoup quand même j'espere que ce que vous avez fait est juste.Si quelqun le veut, il peut aussi amélioerer le texte,Merci