Besoin d'un petit coup de main (anglais correstion!)
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MErci! eh voui!
T'en ai une toi?! 
Il m'en faut un, pourtant Répondre à ssquirtrock
Petit constat :
Tu mets trop souvent "I like" machin ou trucmuche dans tes phrases. Il y a d'autres façon de dire que l'on apprécie quelque chose en anglais (i'm fond of...,etc).
Sinon, tu ne te débrouille pas trop mal 
J'ai mis en majuscule les points à corriger (selon moi)
I would like to go to see you. There are so MANY things I HAVE to see in America. I wish i WOULD go to the Chinese district, because it is A famous neighborhood where we can meet celebrities but also(mais aussi ..) because I have vietnamESE originS and because I like the Asian food. Moreover I like the way they respect the cult of quietness. Although I like their culture which is very opened
Then it is a BIGGER district as in THAN Paris I think.
(Moi, j'aurai mis "This is also a big district, similar to Paris I think" )
I hope i will go TO Central park because it is A famous area full of greenery in the world. There are lots of activities to do...Moreover i would like to meet celebrities.
I would like too to go to the Greenwich village TOO because there are many students and THIS IS know for punk rock bars, funky cafes and trendy boutiques.And I would like to see a gigg.
Si tu es perdu en anglais, essaie d'écouter attentivement les paroles de groupes anglos saxons, la syntaxe viendra....
Et dis-toi que l'anglais reste une langue ultra simple à côté du français...
Message édité par Bodiker le 15-10-2007 à 23:15:56
/!\ Wish ne s'utilise QUE pour exprimer un souhait un regret donc un truc au passé !!!! Utilise I hope à la place 
I hope i COULD visit the chinese district because it is a famous neighborhood where we can meet celebrities but also because I have vietnamese origins and I like(enjoy ? i'm kind of ? évites les répétitions ^^) Asian food.
Moreover I like the way they respect the cult of quietness although I like their culture which is very open.
Also I think it is a as big district as in Paris.
I hope i could go TO Central park because it is a famous area full of greenery(nature etc..) in the world. There are lots of activities to do...Moreover i would like to meet some celebrities.
I would like to go to Greenwich village too because there are many students and it is know for punk rock bars, funky cafe and trendy boutiques. And I would like to see a gigg.
