Anglais --- Correction
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Bonjour à tous n'étant pas un élève bilingue... et ayant un travail à rendre, je suis persuadé qu'il reste énorméments de fautes... J'aimerai que quelqu'un puisse me corriger mes fautes.Ce travail est noté, et trés important pour mon année...
Bref si quelqu'un à l'amabilité de le faire je le remercie d'avance. 
1) Why do people emigrate to other countries ?
People emigrate to countries for different reasons. in the main coses of immigration, people emigrate for escape poverty & famine. They flee theire countries to improve their living conditions, because where they don't get job. They escape because they are young and they have lot of hope to start new life. Other people run away because of war, or a dictatorial government. Most of immigrant people they come from Africa, Asia and South America because they are attracted by the occidental model that is a success for them.
Another form of migration exists, that of the elite, it is between the rich countries which are, USA, Canada, Europe and japan.
2) Would you live in another country ? Why ? or Why not ?
I would like to travel in many countries, but living there is another story. I do not quite know the culture of the countries, but some interests me for various reasons.
The USA, to me, is a country that makes you want to live there but it has many drawbacks for the middle class, paying medical care, not welfare, and a pervasive ... Racial Discrimination
The American dream does not therefore attracts me more than that.
The status me as much as a student is the UK, in particular the city of London, because it brings a lot of news bands and pop-rock festival, for that reason I would live here but prices and rents schools are unfortunately exorbitant ...
The country that I would like to discover its culture, India is a mysterious country in which to live for me one of the greatest men in the world, Gandhi ...
3) Describe the picture (voilà ce que représente en gros l'image Cliker ICI (ps: dans mon document cela est sous forme de couverture de magazine.)
I think that the photography found on the cover of the magazine "the economist" has been taken near the international border between Mexico and the USA, because this border lot of people cross illegally & I see a roadsign that represents to me a family of immigrants. The USA even brandished a mesh to prevent Mexicans from entering American and con
Nstruisent a concrete wall. I think it is degrading to put humans on a panel of this kind because they are usually restricted to animals wandering.
This emigration benefits to many people because they provide a labor cheap in the country, but it is nevertheless well wages higher than that Mexicans could have won in their country. Money attracts surtotu when it is enough to walk to pull itself out of poverty ...
I BELIEVE (plus de conviction) THIS PICTURE TAKEN FROM the cover of the magazine "the economist" has been taken near the international border between Mexico and the USA.
SURE ENOUGH (en effet) this border IS CROSSED ILLEGALLY BY A lot of people, AND I CAN see a roadsign that SEEMS TO BE a family of immigrants.
The USA even brandished a mesh to prevent Mexicans from entering THE AMERICAN TERRITORY. FUTHERMORE THEY ARE BUILDING a REAL wall.
I think it is degrading to ILLUSTRATE HUMAN BEINGS on THIS KIND OF BOARD because they are usually restricted to animals wandering.
This emigration IS BENEFICIAL to many people because they provide A CHEAP MANPOWER (labor est correct ms c'était pas clair) in the country, but nevertheless IT IS well wages higher than WHAT Mexicans could have EARN in their country.
Money attracts ESPECIALLY when it is enough to walk to pull itself out of poverty (je trouve ta phrase maladroite ms bon ... ce n'est que mon avis. en gros tu dis que s'ils emigrent c'est principalement pcq ils ont juste à marcher pour arriver aux USA ...).
Voila j'espere t'avoir aidé.
Tu me diras ta note
Message édité par Nea69 le 15-10-2007 à 22:41:55
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