fautes sur rédactions d'anglais
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Bonjour à tous, j'ai une rédction d'anglais à rendre pour demain et jaimerais savoir si j'ai fait des fautes et lesquelles ? meci
On one hand, I think Mr Roarks was right to refused Mrs Wilmot's
comition. First of all, Mr Roarks was a joung and brillant architect, so it was better for his status of creator to didn't rebuild the same house of Austen Heller, that meaned he didn't have any imagination. Moreover,
Mrs Wilmot was very arrogant and she had no taste, so Mr Roarks would have had difficulties to work in such conditions and did something what Mrs Wilmot's like
On the other hand, I think Mr Roarks wasn't right to refused Mrs
Wilmot's comition. In fact, Mr Roaks was young and he had to earn a good living, so he could build the house and be paid. Build one more house would have extend his work and permite to meet others clients.
On one hand, I think Mr Roarks was right to refused Mrs Wilmot's
comition. First of all, Mr Roarks was a joung and brillant architect, so it was better for his status of creator to didn't rebuild the same house of Austen Heller, that meaned he didn't have any imagination. Moreover,
Mrs Wilmot was very arrogant and she had no taste, so Mr Roarks would have had difficulties to work in such conditions and did something what Mrs Wilmot's like
On the other hand, I think Mr Roarks wasn't right to refused Mrs
Wilmot's comition. In fact, Mr Roaks was young and he had to earn a good living, so he could build the house and be paid. Build one more house would have extend his work and permite to meet others clients.
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"was right to refuse" (pas de d)
"which meaned" (et non that)
pour "arrogant", tu es sur ??
"and did something Mrs W. like" (il faut peut-être changer la conjugaison de like, ça dépend de ce que tu veux dire...)
"make a living" (et non earn)
"building a house more would extend (ou "would have extended") his work and would permit him to meet new customers"
Je crois que c'est à peu près tout
"which meaned" (et non that)
pour "arrogant", tu es sur ??
"and did something Mrs W. like" (il faut peut-être changer la conjugaison de like, ça dépend de ce que tu veux dire...)
"make a living" (et non earn)
"building a house more would extend (ou "would have extended") his work and would permit him to meet new customers"
Je crois que c'est à peu près tout
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