correction de faute

BONJOUR, j'ai eu une suite d'une histoire a faire en anglais, j'ai corigé un max de faute mais je crois qu'il n'en reste encore pas mal: voici le devoir :


Neither one nor two, Helen rushed to the telephone. She felt like to see again him. Even after twenty eight years, she remember still where she tidied up Peter’s number. She hesitated one moment before (de composer) his number. But it is the lady who picked up the telephone. Then, Helen felt ill at ease. She asked her, if she didn’t know Peter. The lady answered her that Peter had already moved eight years ago. The lady reflected and made wait some minutes Helen. When she came back, she gave Peter’s address. Helen thanked her, then hung up the telephone. Helen was satisfied and relieved at the same moment. She knew finally where she could find Peter. Peter lived in ………
She decided that she shall go to see it the next day.
The next day, she spent time in the bathroom even if she had decided that she dressed casually. It’s three hours later, she met itself in front the door of him apartment. She hesitated to ring of the door or (faire demi tour). Nevertheless, she wanted to behave in a relaxed way but more she waited and more she was anxious. It’s then that she took her courage (à 2 mains) and pressed on the bell. She waited for some seconds the beating heart. It is then that the door opened.
She him recognized, he hadn’t so changed except for some wrinkles which had taken place on the face. Peter made a jump behind. He looked at Helen attentively, he believed to dream. Helen apologized for disturbing him. She says to him that she would like to speak to him. He seemed pleased with to see her, he made her sign of brought in to drink something.
The door closed. Helen and peter spoke for a long time.
But as for the continuation, it is quite other story.


merci si vous avez le courage de le lire est de regardé les fautes

je te remercie bcp pour ta réponse, merci merci merci