urgent anglais !!!

pouvez vous m'aider a corriger les fautes de mon dm d'anglais pour demain merci bcp !!!

The Judeo-Christian tradition explaining Eve's temptation which becomes a sin for apple of the tree of knowledge, illustrates one of the contributed a role about a view of the curiosity.

The curiosity can be fault but in some situations, we can see it as a quality.

The curiosity can represent a quality insofar as quality shows itself as a power of attention, a need of know, to learn, to reason better and to have a better knowledge among the field in everyday life. Thus the example of a child demonstrates this idea. Indeed, the child want to write and read before tha age. The children are open-minded as for the world. It is the reason why the foreign languages are learnt early to the children. The curiosity is a quality necessary fot to progress. It is a average of knowledge. In this way, the explorers as Christopher Colombus and Marco Polo thanks to the curiosity, have discovered and explored new countries and new civilizations. The curiosity is the beginning of modernity.

In conclusion, the curiosity is at once a quality and a fault. I think that the curiosity can serve as not serve, it depends of limits fixed. So, according to José Maria Eça de Quieros "the curiosity takes to everything: sometimes to listen to doors, sometimes to discover America".