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Correction de mon résumé de rapport de stage

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Quelqu'un pourrait-il corriger mon résumé svp? merci d'avance

The ISO 14001 is an environmental norm, which supervised improvement of the environment competences and performances of the factory. This certification proves to public the low impact of this factory on the environment. The nuclear power plant of Paluel is by the sea (Manche). This characteristic gives a bad image of this business. Moreover this society used the fission and imply too a bad image. That’s why this important society would be certifying ISO 14001.
One time per year an audit is realise by an organism and during an audit, a minor mistake was observed in the Nuclear Power Plant (CNPE) of Paluel. This mistake was due to communication failings while concerned chemical product and more precisely Using Local Form (FLU). Indeed, they are compulsory on the scene of the work.
This important communication failing was due to building work. Indeed, persons who worked there aren’t in Paluel all the year. They worked there occasionally. So they don’t have enough information concerned regulation of the nuclear power plant.
The software O.L.I.M.P. allows everybody to give FLU on the scene of the intervention. This database manages all chemical product used to all places of the society EDF by grouping informations. All employees could look for have this form on his scene of work.
This report of the internship explains the work realized during 10 weeks in the Nuclear Power Plant of Paluel. This report explains interviews realized to the employees. It explicit how to make changes to different documents and updating the database O.L.I.M.P.. The updating the database O.L.I.M.P. isn’t finish because this database managed chemical product which aren’t stay the same. So documents modifications are totally finish and effective.

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Le résumé en anglais c'est un abstract et c'est souvent demander pour un rapport de stage. Donc si il demande à le corriger c'est parce qu'il n'est pas sur de lui dans cette langue je pense !
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