[2nd] texte anglais de 100 mots.
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Je dois rédiger un texte de 100 mots en anglais en me prenant pour un immigré qui arrive à Ellis Island. Je dois montrer ses impressions et autres.
Le sujet : Write an entry from the diary of your immigrant. Imagine some of the experiences you might have had. Why are you emigrating ? How would you feel if you decided to leave your homeland forever ? What impressions would you have upon arrival at Ellis Island ?
Mon début : I wanting emigrating in America in order to didn't have enought money. I felt impressed strange, because it was difficult adopted to American life. On the other and, i felt seasick, and the journey on the boat was inconfortable.
C'est court, mais je sais pas par où commencer, comment finir,.. le "because" me gêne, il doit bien y avoir une autre expression moins "noob" non ?
Et si l'on pouvait me donner des idées, en français déjà, ça serait gentil.
Merci d'avance!
Je viens demander de l'aide si c'est toujours possible =)
Je dois rédiger un texte de 100 mots en anglais en me prenant pour un immigré qui arrive à Ellis Island. Je dois montrer ses impressions et autres.
Le sujet : Write an entry from the diary of your immigrant. Imagine some of the experiences you might have had. Why are you emigrating ? How would you feel if you decided to leave your homeland forever ? What impressions would you have upon arrival at Ellis Island ?
Mon début : I wanting emigrating in America in order to didn't have enought money. I felt impressed strange, because it was difficult adopted to American life. On the other and, i felt seasick, and the journey on the boat was inconfortable.
C'est court, mais je sais pas par où commencer, comment finir,.. le "because" me gêne, il doit bien y avoir une autre expression moins "noob" non ?
Et si l'on pouvait me donner des idées, en français déjà, ça serait gentil.
Merci d'avance!
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Jsuis desole de te dire sa mais t'a fait plein de fautes dans ton intro!!!
I came to America to find a job because where I come from we do't get paid much. And my father used to tell me so much about America. He kept saying it was big and wonderful. So now that i've grown up, I wanted to come to America. And my father was right it's amazing. But the boat was very long and I was seasick.
Bon voila si ca peut t'aider. Bonne chance pour la suite!
I came to America to find a job because where I come from we do't get paid much. And my father used to tell me so much about America. He kept saying it was big and wonderful. So now that i've grown up, I wanted to come to America. And my father was right it's amazing. But the boat was very long and I was seasick.
Bon voila si ca peut t'aider. Bonne chance pour la suite!
I came to America to find a job because where I come from we didn't get paid much. And my father used to tell me so much about America. He kept saying it was big and wonderful. So now that i've grown up, I wanted to come to America. And my father was right it's amazing. I travelled with few baggages. But the boat was very long, the journey was inconfortable and i was seasick.
When i was arrived in Ellis Island, i found that it was difficult to adopted the Americal life. At my arrived, we passed me an interview to know if I am ready to live in America (A mon arrivé, on m'a fait passé une interview pour savoir si je suis apte à vivre en Amerique).
Avec l'aide de ton texte, je suis arrivé à ça. Je pense que ça peut suffir. non ? Si y'a des fautes peut-on me dire où ?
When i was arrived in Ellis Island, i found that it was difficult to adopted the Americal life. At my arrived, we passed me an interview to know if I am ready to live in America (A mon arrivé, on m'a fait passé une interview pour savoir si je suis apte à vivre en Amerique).
Avec l'aide de ton texte, je suis arrivé à ça. Je pense que ça peut suffir. non ? Si y'a des fautes peut-on me dire où ?
Gost_57 a dit :
I came to America to find a job because where I come from we didn't get paid much. And my father used to tell me so much about America. He kept saying it was big and wonderful. So now that i've grown up, I wanted to come to America. And my father was right it's amazing. I travelled with few baggages. But the boat was very long, the journey was inconfortable and i was seasick.When i was arrived in Ellis Island, i found that it was difficult to adopted the Americal life. At my arrived, we passed me an interview to know if I am ready to live in America (A mon arrivé, on m'a fait passé une interview pour savoir si je suis apte à vivre en Amerique).
Avec l'aide de ton texte, je suis arrivé à ça. Je pense que ça peut suffir. non ? Si y'a des fautes peut-on me dire où ?
I came to America in order to find a job because where i came from wages are very low. My father used to tell a lot of things about America. " it is a big and wonderful country" he kept saying me (ici c'est bien de mettre ta phrase entre guillemets par ce que elle est de ton père, ensuite le temps utilisé doit être le présent , par ce que si tu dis was big et wonderful, tu faits une erreurs de logique , ce qui veut dire que maintenant ce n'est plus le cas. donc le présent est plus approprié)
so now i have grown up, I wanted to come to America , and my father was right, it is amazing! ( le mot travel n'est pas très approprié ici car tu es venu au USA pour rester, ou on peut comprendre par travel que tu viens seulement pour visiter) I came here with only few baggages with me. the boat was very big, i was seasick all along the journey because it was inconfortable.
when i arrived to ( was arrived , c'est la voie passive , c pas correct) Ellis Island, I found it difficult to be adapted to the american life. at my arrival, they made me an interview to know if Im ready to live in America.
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