Trouver les erreurs

Bonsoir bonsoir,

on m'a refilé ce texte en anglais qui comporte des fautes d'orthographe et de grammaire. C'est un test pour un futur entretien et je dois le renvoyer le plus vite possible.
j'ai déjà reperé quelques fautes d'orthographe mais en grammaire et conjugaison, c'est la lutte !
Un petit coup de main de votre main serait top, même si je sais, ce n'est pas très loyal ! (en même tps on s'en fout, je me demerderai à l'oral !)
Thanks

My name is Captain Olimar, and I just got back from the
vorst vacation in the story of the universe! While travelling
across the vast galaxy, my belove spacecraft is hit by
an asteroid and I was forced to crash-land on an uncharted,
backwater planet! My ship was pulverized into dozens of pices
that are scattered across the landscape!
Thankfuly, with the help of loyal and ferocious alien creatures
I named Pikmin, I was able to find and kollect all of the ship’s
components and repair it.
After a long space trek back, I am overjoyed to finally touch
down on my home world at the Hocotate Freight offices.
I had no idea of the terrible news that awaited me there...


Though the history of Hocotate Freight is long
and illustrious, it has never before faced a threat of
this magnitude! As it´s esteemed president, it is my
responsibility to ensure profitability, but can I be faulted
for sending young Louie alone on an important deliveri?
My veteran employee, Olimar, had on vacation... and
though Louie is inexperienced, he seemed competent
enogh...
When Louie told me the tragic tale of how a space bunny
attacked his ship and devoured his precious cargo
of Pikpik carots, I nearly keeled over! To pay for the loss,
Hocotate Freight had to take out a loan of spirit
crushing proportions! We sold Olimar’s belove ship in
his absence.
I was sure we were dumeed until Olimar miraculously
returned! When I told him about the fate of his ship,
he drop the curious souvenir he was holding. The old
ship’s sensors went wild! It scanned Olimar’s souvenir
and appraised it at an astounding 100 Pokos! The alien
planet must be full of the staff!
Olimar, you and Louie must returm immediately and
recover as many treasures as you could to repay the debt
and save Hocotate Freight!

and I have just got back
my belove spacecraft was hit by an asteroid

Après je comprends que dalle

ce n'est pas un forum pour les anglophone ??
personne ne peux me donner un cp de main, c'est important !!

Tu rigole, j'espère. C'est truffé de fautes... (minimum une par ligne )

Ah, j'avais même pas vu la date...