anglais :-(

es ce que quelqu'un serait assez gentil de me corriger ce texte svp j'aimerais pour une fois avoir une bonne note svp je vous en supplie.


First of all, I would like to say than I don’t have a trip or a travel, so I’m going to write about the experience than I’ll never forget. Since I'm a young girl, I want to be a professional singer. All of competition I find, I’m coming. I’ll never forget all of them than I did between winter 1999 (my first audition) and March 2007 (my last audition). Sometimes I offer to sing on wedding or anything else event who need a singer. In June 2006, my boyfriend, my brother and I we’ve been to the wedding of cancer patient. It’s for this cancer, than this man want to married his wife. In the beginning of the ceremonies, I sing ‘Évangéline’ song. The stranger thing in that song it’s the lyrics, because it was a same name in the song than the man who’ll had a cancer. I will never forget the story about this man, because he moves me a lot and it’s a great experience to sing for a people like that. I’m lucky to be able to give a song and in the same time give more happiness in their life. To me it’s nothing to do that thing but it’s more important than we think for them.

merci beaucoup
anne-marie

j'ai fait ça sans dico, j'ai corrigé les fautes qui m'ont sauté aux yeux!

ATTENTIOn tu confonds THAN avec THAT!!

Pense à ton passé si tu fais un discours dans le passé

fais toi éventuellement corrigé par qqun d'autre

pour la phrase de la fin, j'ai pas trop compris ce que tu voulais dire, alors je l'ai un peu changé, je pense avoir gardé un peu le sens

ben j'espère que t'auras une bonne note